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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- ( into) This For ALL my woman beaters and Bad Cops... BEWARE! Hahaha..
- (Verse)
- One.
- Two.
- Three and to the 4..
- Here's a story about bout a rebel lanoire.
- Lanoire was about settle the score..
- //
- Vengeance on her mind her life she swore.
- Swore to protect her sisters and brothers from bad cops and more.
- To kill a man if he treat them like whores.
- Bad history of relationships with lame niggas treating her poor.
- So one day she had enough.
- Had to show herself some love that was tuff.
- Them "scruff McGruffs" they call Policeman did nothing.
- Told her dude that they'd arrest, but were bluffing.
- This left Lanoire just huffing and puffing til she blew a fuse in her head.
- Police did nothing , so she bagged her some led.
- Next time he Hit her or another dude hit her sisters instead.
- She'd blast a bullet flying straight to their heads and plead self defense..
- It's Immense protection had for them sense.
- Became a short fuse ( this Woman's Intense!)
- Mentally building a fence.
- Keeping out them lames or their old flames.
- Beware of Lanoire signs nailed gave them fear like she was lurking and near.
- Every single time they saw one of sisters.
- They walked away without a hi or a bye.
- "Do I know you? You high?"
- These guys were terrified except David wasn't.
- He liked Lanoire ( he's an Ex of her Cousin.)
- The type to really push buttons.
- Lanoire had found out that David was beating her.
- So of course he's horrified of meeting her , his heart fast as its beating up.
- Lanoire paid a visit to David.
- One day I'm Sure he wishes she hadn't of made it.
- He's in hell now..
- You know how?
- She blew his fucking brains out!
- His couch was White you cannot get the stains out.
- She's really off her chain now!
- ( hook)
- And she won't stop!..
- Cuz its 1-8-7 fuck them lazy ass .
- Cops!..
- Yea!
- And she won't stop!
- Paying a visit to them soon!
- Whether they like it.
- Or not...
- ( True Story)
DEFENDER'S RAP
- //Verse 1
- Once upon a time I was walking down the street
- And that's when I happened to meet
- A guy who challenged me to a battle and I knew I could beat
- Him any day or any night
- I battled him and over my head there was a spotlight
- I won because I knew my left from right
- Cause the other guy fell right off the stage
- Then he exploded in a fit of rage
- Even if he hadn't he'd be kept in a cage
- Because from other rappers he'd been stealing
- And if he lived to find out he'd been caught he'd run off squealing
- Like a dirty old pig
- Who's lyrics were fake like a wig
- He would then just quit rapping and do a merry irish jig
- //Hook
- That's what happened in that battle
- I herded him out like he was cattle
- He was just like a baby with a rattle
- Who was so wild he needed a saddle
- Like a horse
- //Verse 2
- The guy who exploded had a brother
- He wouldn't explode cause he was the other
- Type and he challenged me to a battle to avenge
- His brother and then maybe get his revenge
- He stepped on the stage and spat out damn good lyrics
- And when he rapped all the people could hear it
- Eventually I was up then he was beaten it must run in the family
- Guess his rap wasn't manly
- Enough to beat my crazy rhymes
- And I knew I could beat him a million times
- He got pretty mad but he didn't explode
- From what I remember he looked like a toad
- //Hook
- That's what happened in that battle
- I herded him out like he was cattle
- He was just like a baby with a rattle
- Who was so wild he needed a saddle
- Like a horse