Battles  AJ_Raps1 vs THATDUDERAYMON

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no cursing and has to be on everyday society problems like for example police brutality.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • This is a story of a boy named Jackson,
  • he's always maxing and relaxing,
  • had big dreams of playing for the NBA
  • but all of that got shattered
  • when he used crack and cocaine.
  • Every time he smoked and sniffed
  • He would always act strange,
  • his life was never the same
  • But he was so addicted that he could never blame
  • Crack and cocaine
  • not another way to keep up with this constant need for these drugs
  • walking around acting like a thug,
  • Then he crashes like media and loses his confidence and has to live
  • with the consequences,
  • his mama would wonder, Why he was always talking to his self,
  • why he was screaming there were bugs on him
  • or when he may pick and scratch at his own skin.
  • While at school he had trouble concentrating.
  • All his friends thought he was playing
  • but he was slowly fading
  • Until one day, his mama saw his arms
  • With track marks, that look like it came from
  • Sharks,
  • She started crying thinking what did her son do
  • What is the issue?
  • I fell off of a bike that's all now let me get through
  • The next morning, the rain was pouring
  • Jackson got sent to the hospital,
  • his mama didn't know why her son was unconscious
  • his mama didn't know why he was injecting,
  • his mama didn't know why her only son.. is in the hospital.
  • The doctors said he had a heart attack
  • then his mom stepped back
  • and got on her knees
  • "saying god please save my baby"
  • I guess god heard her prayer
  • Becuase Jackson woke up and just started staring
  • The doctor told his mom he was conscious
  • She started running pass the faucet
  • In that moment of silence,
  • Jackson faced the consequences
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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I get on with life as a rapper,
  • I'm a real kinda person.
  • I like money making and rapping.
  • I like to contemplate money.
  • But when I start to daydream,
  • My mind turns straight to cars.
  •  
  • Oh oh oh!
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  • Sometimes I look at myself and I look into my eyes,
  • I notice the way I think about cars with a smile,
  • Curved lips I just can't disguise.
  • But I think it's money making my life worthwhile.
  • Why is it so hard for me to decide which I love more?
  • Money or...
  • Cars?I like to use words like 'Boyz' and 'Real.'
  • I like to use words about money.
  • But when I stop my talking,
  • My mind turns straight to cars.
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  • Oh oh oh!
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  • Sometimes I look at myself and I look into my eyes,
  • I notice the way I think about cars with a smile,
  • Curved lips I just can't disguise.
  • But I think it's money making my life worthwhile.
  • Why is it so hard for me to decide which I love more?
  • Money or...
  • Cars?I like to hang out with Dae Dae and Darrius.
  • But when left alone,Oh oh oh!
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  • Sometimes I look at myself and I look into my eyes,
  • I notice the way I think about cars with a smile,
  • Curved lips I just can't disguise.
  • But I think it's money making my life worthwhile.
  • Why is it so hard for me to decide which I love more?
  • Money or...
  • Cars?I hate haters and tots.
  • But I just think back to cars,
  • And I'm happy once again.
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  • Oh oh oh!
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  • My mind turns straight to money.

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