Battles  Biggjake vs AdoniS

RULES

please be dope and creative

Max of 50 lines

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • i've had amnesia for about as long as i can remember,
  • i bought a clock in december,
  • yet it helps none....
  • because i threw it out my window and it did not fly,
  • either i wasn't havin fun,
  • or someone lied...
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  • I've got the heart of a reverend,
  • the mind of a legend,
  • yet my time is irrelevant,
  • when lies are impressive,
  • and eyes are deceptive,
  • damn i need a second....
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  • from contraception,
  • my methods have been hectic,
  • i see the world arounddd me, somebody wrecked it,
  • childrennn addicted to snacks and psychedelics
  • i subdue my blues with booze and plyometrics
  • But shit ain't sweet,
  • these streets are diabetic
  • the hatred is pathetic,
  • damn,
  • i'm under pressure,
  • try to preach peace, and sweep under the rug,
  • they do unto your lectures.
  • use rude gestures.
  • they laugh now,
  • but who's who?
  • jesters,
  • always cry when thy curtains won't sever.
  • damn...
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  • i've had amnesia for about as long as i can remember,
  • i bought a clock in december,
  • yet it helps none....
  • because i threw it out my window and it did not fly,
  • either i wasn't havin fun,
  • or someone lied...
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  • I bought a pair of,
  • new shoes from the dope man,
  • and i don't know what he laced them with, oh man,
  • but i've been trippin alllllll day, no weed no coke can,
  • get down to the sound of this slow jam.
  • awwwe damn....
  • i can't seem to remember that thing that i forgot,
  • was it just a dream or a scene from a plot,
  • was there once a day, where the kids would play,
  • in the streets, and be home round 8 to eat?
  • i saw a kid, he was about 11 or 12,
  • he smelled, of ciggarettes and liqour as well
  • i said, young man you know that's bad for your health
  • he flipped a bird, told me to fuck myself.
  • a couple months went by, i never saw the guy,
  • i heard his mother cry on the day he died.
  • damn... damn...
  • i've had amnesia for about as long as i can remember,
  • i bought a clock in december,
  • yet it helps none....
  • because i threw it out my window and it did not fly,
  • either i wasn't havin fun,
  • or someone lied...
  • man...
  • i remember birds, bees, queens, kings
  • Love in the air because the doves would sing
  • Now there's drugs in the air, flying over seas
  • so many dreams, yet i never get to sleep,
  • is the end getting near or am i merely counting sheep....
  • deep gets the thoughts of a man who can't be bought
  • i've made a friend of every man i've fought.
  • there's times that we talk, there's times that we walk,
  • these lines, sometime we leave lines of chalk.
  • damn...

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • I got 5 on the battle - where the votes lie- he has 5 minus mine where his ballad lies
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  • Your rhymes aren't garbage, they're recycled, through a-
  • Repetitive cycle in misuse or rapid fire boom missiles,
  • Over cooked Acid steamed vocals, blow steam by you like
  • A whistle, and a ballistic pencil used and viewed as a fire
  • Arm utensil, hand on fire, for the first rhyme burnt through
  • My veins and vessels.
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  • I banned you from the competition because your rent was pass due,
  • fuck your house rap, I write poetry inside my castle
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  • I bought my votes with my rhymes, your verses just had no
  • Value
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  • How could my skill be around yours, when I only stand right above you ,
  • left under you on the ground, pishing up weight
  • My rhymes pulled
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  • I gave you permission to x me out, but after checking your work,
  • i realized Rihanna didn't allow you to
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  • My throne is pure chrome I over thrown a so called Goldie
  • They call me poetry pope, the uncrowned saint other temple
  • Of hope, rope my rhymes to his mentality height strangle
  • His rhymes until he has a by force lodge of Luke like overdose
  • of a congested nose with oily greased up flows
  • I tricked his rhymes out gold so you'd know how bold
  • He must be to promote such a disgrace towards the poetry
  • Pole notes, I wrote verses in blue bold, white like Cocaine's
  • Or when your mother did porn and dope, I'm Fingering his pride
  • with my eyes and a rifle scope , pointed aimed straight at his dome,
  • grope my balls, poke my dick while his mother deep
  • throats my nuts while her globes fall in between her guts ,
  • and sweet seamen shoots from her nose, I beat your son,
  • she beats my meat,on two knees she still blows my blow pop and tube
  • of glucose my pupil shows no fear but deep down,
  • I know no one can come close to beating me with unique flows I
  • come close, then close in when I needed my Christ conscious most
  • She sucks on her tippy toes for an Arizona and pack of Cigarette smokes
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