Battles Ambiguous vs JimBodhi
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Yeah,
- crisp was the sun
- fresh was the grass,
- I stepped inside of my school
- first day of the class.
- With a heavy heart and nervous mind
- I was moving forward, leaving all behind.
- As I made my way
- murmurs and chats grew,
- "hey whose this guy?
- and whats, he up to?"
- I wasn't an oddball, maybe just a freak
- nothing big
- but maybe, that's how its meant to be.
- People didn't liked me,
- just gave stares
- I was like a dying fish, being hunked by bears
- As i moved to a nearby seat
- making myself easy, then came big Pete
- "You cant sit here, its my chair"
- I replied, "its the final one, Iv to sit somewhere"
- "not my problem" thats what he said he said
- "im not in mood, so dont sit on my head"
- Then came recess, time to get out of my shell
- be friendly with people, maybe
- life wouldnt worse as hell.
- But no body bothered, same was the case
- everyone ignored me, bored were their face.
- "hey kid, why dont you join us?
- and have your lunch"
- said Jason, as he munched.
- As i walked to them, someone stretched their leg
- and made me fall,
- whole Cafeteria mocked,
- I was laughing stock for all.
- Nervous, embarrassed, that's what i felt
- "maybe life wouldn't easy,
- if that's how I dealt."
- Now I've to make these people
- one of my guys
- cause only the fittest survives
- and weaker dies.
- Time after time, they made it clear
- I wasnt needed,
- got abuse and jeers.
- Story doesnt end here,
- darkness crawled.
- Walking my way back, there as an assault!
- they kicked me down, crushed my face
- blow after blow, on every place.
- "What did i do? What was my fault?"
- "You hit on Sam's girl, after the Waltz"
- I said, "I helped her out, she had an accident"
- "You needed a chance, thats what it meant.
- You were never like us
- but you wanted to be one. Now here is my gift
- Or my thank you in return."
- Then he kicked on my chin, i was left undone.
- nose began to bleed, vision fading, pain indeed.
- That's how my kindness payed off
- "being different" nearly got me killed
- even now they haunt me
- worse than "Hounds of Baskerville"
- Beats used: "Physics" by razor
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I’m sorry that it took this many years
- You’d have never wanted these tears
- It’s time to move on so here’s my goodbye song…
- I’m from a young family and I love them no end
- This is the story of our friend that couldn’t mend
- The demons in his head, he battled to pretend
- He fought to the end but came off second best
- He was broken since the words were spoken
- From the doctor that his Mrs had chosen
- She didn’t like his kids, didn’t think they were his
- So she forced the DNA test that ripped him to bits
- Three sons mothered by his ex-wife
- The three most important parts of his life
- When he realised they weren’t blood related
- His drinking got hold and depression escalated
- I’m sorry that it took this many years
- You’d have never wanted these tears
- It’s time to move on so here’s my goodbye song…
- This is my goodbye song...
- I remember the days when he’d burst inside
- A spring in his step, that twinkle in his eye
- Was it all for show? Was it just a front?
- Was there anything that I could’ve done?
- To stop the spiral, the downward slope
- To breathe air in his lungs, bring back hope
- How was I supposed to know? I fight myself…
- How was I supposed to know?
- I’ll never have the answers to the questions in my mind
- Just different opinions expressed over time
- If only once more I could look in to his eyes
- Knowing he’s leaving I could say my goodbyes
- I could get some closure, I could roll the credits
- I could take this confusion, I could try to forget it
- I guess life goes on, he’d be proud
- Of our family and where we are now
- I’m sorry that it took this many years
- You’d have never wanted these tears
- It’s time to move on so here’s my goodbye song…
- I miss you daily, I miss you daily…
- But here’s my goodbye song…
- Here’s my goodbye song.