Battles Therrin vs Coolguy
RULES
32 lines max. No holds barred. Have fun with it.
Max of 33 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
This rap was deleted.DEFENDER'S RAP
- Fist, let me and you get on the same page,
- I been listing to rap from a very young age.
- I'm not new, I'm no knave, man I know what I'm doing,
- But I'll diss you real quick, your reputation I'll ruin.
- I'm a Paladin, I'm pure, man, my armor's Adamantium,
- You threw some lines at the new guy, thinkin that I'd be a victim.
- Teach me how to fight? Like I ain't done that my whole life.
- FOG reppin north side, I ain't no suburbanite.
- You'll ignite my fright? Man you're stealing Katy Perry lines.
- Steal all my followers? zero plus 25's 25.
- Can't comprehend your structure? shit's elementary,
- A A, B B, c'mon you're not foolin me.
- You're talking shit at my sound cloud like you know quality,
- I checked your's out, only one song, no beats.
- Get off your high horse, maybe put in some real work,
- and then we'll discuss who's raps have the better torque.
- You insulted the Chub n' Tuck, like I would be shameful.
- You callin me fat? What the fuck is this? Middle school?
- Thinkin that my size effects my lines or me dissin you?
- Say that to ma boy Biggie or Mike, let's see who wins that feud.
- By now you've realized the futility of taking on Paladin Lee,
- I appreciate you comedy consult, but in this I'm better than thee.
- Thinkin that just 'caus you can rhyme you can rap?
- You can take me on in a battle with those lines of crap?
- That's just shitty poetry, with the addition of disses,
- I think you better go home now, get back to the misses.
- All in all, I thank you for challenging me to this,
- Maybe you are the better comic, 'caus I laughed at every diss.
- I also recorded this, not to over do it tho,
- Just wanted an example, to show off my actual flow.
- Oh, one more thing, before we flip over this card,
- Therrin Geycloud sounds like the name of my level 2 bard.