Battles Biggjake awaiting a challenger...
RULES
I'd like this battle to have depth, Write something poetic, that stimulates emotion and thought.
Max of 25 lines
THIS BATTLE IS OVER
Biggjake won this battle!
START YOUR OWN BATTLE
Thousands of battles have taken place on RapPad. Why not join the fun?
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- one kiss,
- upon a pair of temporary lips,
- with permanence,
- fighting back the feeling of nervousness,
- held breaths,
- uncertain yet it's worth the risk,
- flesh connects........
- perfectness
- the pain fades away,
- i'm impervious,
- .
- one tear,
- running down the cheek of one so dear,
- so honey sweet,
- her lipstick smeared,
- so far away, yet so near,
- so tense,
- thoughts of sin with no sense,
- my heart skips,
- our fingertips split,
- gone are the days of my childish grin,
- i wonder if i'll ever want to smile again.
Still waiting for Luesofa to respond.
Make sure you let Luesofa know you challenged them. A defender reserves the right to delete a battle directed at them.