Battles  Jackthecat vs fuckzhui

RULES

No direct dissing. Write about something that frustrates you.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Somebody produce this, I got supreme music
  • Uhmm I mean lyrics? Fuck it, nobody'll hear this.
  • I mean read it? CD hits, many are needed
  • Like a baker makin' dough for a fam'ly with three kids.
  • So blame shitty luck but, oh, I'm givin up.
  • Take my mouth, stitch it shut cause my mission's done:
  • Impossible. Like Tom Cruise pretendin' he's straight
  • When ten men place their rear ends in his face.
  • What good's contendin' my fate? These dudes defendin the game,
  • XyloSylo, RandyRhino, and Hutch, I'd need dyno-
  • mite for them to budge, see these guys so untouch-
  • able you'd think you're in art museum when you see em.
  • No use bein' an em cee when it's a crappy day, fuck carpe diem.
  • My punch lines are punchin' me, a bunch of mine are so shitty.
  • Lunch time, hungry em cees are munchin' rhymes like candy bars.
  • Me, I starve, imprisoned, trapped behind these sixteen bars.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Devil's trying to take my soul
  • i'm stuck in a hole of trouble
  • 24/7 im on the double
  • But the name of the kingdom of god is calling my name
  • time to let go of this rap game
  • I ain't interested in fame
  • just tryna leave with my level head in tact
  • because i dont want to go back
  • because if i had the chance i never would have rapped
  • i sold my soul to the devil ill never get back
  • but good thing i have faith in the lord
  • Uptown sitting on cloud 9's white porch
  • up on my 11 safely making it to heaven
  • #living in heaven
  • only heaven no hell
  • i'm really a good boy but you cant really tell

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