Battles  UnAuthorised vs hodaril

RULES

This was a late response to a topic that said bring the heat, whatever just diss me

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • You want the heat, thats what i am about,
  • Think twice you might be incapeable to survive the drought
  • Ill extract you to the realm of hell and have the devil poke you with a pitchfork
  • You dork, donkey ass looking human being, ugliest human ive ever seen
  • An depressed eyesore like Eeyore or Rambo, really though you should read more
  • Ill burn you with the heat like 451 farenheit a regular response when i grab the mic
  • Can you fathom the fire i spit? Or am i like a vision of a phantom, you have no time to think
  • You can claim to be in stardom then i am the galaxy,
  • unprepered for a ten bar supernova headed for your cavity

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I'm authorized, I mean im worth more, all this rhyming reason needs a scoreboard, for fools start yelling treason
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  • Reason being i was challenged recently, hence being well seasoned, found out i was quite the gift
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  • Sifting words so openly, making writers not unique, instead of spilling words he would like to fight with me
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  • I'm not a violent emcee, just a playful creator, im like the moon at night, a span from the sun in this equation
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  • I can't box ill run, so you have to fight with words, ill debilitate my prey, for his safety, I wont stand and let him rape me
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  • A coward in a sense, so he runs to grab a pen, as he's getting violently beat, he sparks to rhyme again
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  • but before then I claim the title, to pillage him slowly, as I look ahead at his demise, I watch as he starts folding
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  • I'm molding him, into something, he's never felt, before, he's pist im not a male, so he screams that im a whore
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  • Disrespects me, until my eyes become teary, tries to tear me apart, so I make him weary, wish he never feared me
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  • I guess I've dealt my cards, your not the boss, I've left you scarred, with this imagery, you read so clearly
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  • Clearly your no match for me, like rats when they squirm, they learn there lesson, when there caught between a python so firm

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