Battles  YoungJamesDean vs ConflictedPoet

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Rappers now got no ambition
  • Sounding foreign with each rhyme you're forcin'
  • You week to my fortune
  • 10k's just a portion
  • Like a fucked up abortion
  • Birthing out a one-legged orphan
  • Contortin' my rhymes outta distortion
  • Reading Resuscitation
  • to learn decapitation
  • Plans of eradication
  • of all civilization
  • Rap's a preoccupation
  • And killing's intoxication
  • Imagination, rap renovation
  • Bring back Biggie and Pac Nation
  • Bringing life to my lines like personification
  • Anti-Humanitarian
  • Non-egalitarian
  • Complete totalitarian
  • Aching trigger finger like a septuagenarian
  • Force feeding my meat to vegetarians
  • Reminiscing darker days when I was Cimmerian
  • Flow like a shovel, all these careers that I'm buryin'
  • Kramer, Elaine, and George. Somebody let Jerry in
  • Vocabulary gone farcical
  • Diabolical the way I am grammatical
  • Almost impractical
  • The way I spit this radical
  • Illmatical
  • On my Nas like flow
  • Stay away if you don't want to get your feelings hurt
  • Look back at all the rappers I massacred
  • It just mass occurred
  • My vernacular spectacular
  • Rhyme ambassador
  • To all you fuck boy "rapping" nerds

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Now, I don't mean to be critically crude,
  • emotionally rude or mentally screwed
  • I'm just a typical dude in a cynical mood
  • and it's pointed at you.
  • HONESTLY, you can't handle the truth
  • you have all these theory's -still no proof
  • all this "structure" -still no roof
  • and you get mad when it rains on you?
  • It's true, there's no excuse
  • the knot you tie with your lips is loose
  • recycle, re-use, cram down and re-puke?!?
  • Yeah.. I'm the Duke. -Theres no denying that
  • I got flows so tight I make your bitch look fat
  • That's a fact. I know your'e mad at me though
  • with a sad ego that might stop battling bro.
  • well...yeah you should probably just go.

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