Battles 12 vs Odinson
RULES
true story about your life
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- In my life ive seen plenty of death and fights
- been up plenty of endless nights.
- I was the kid standing in the sidelights
- people look at me as a kid that only writes.
- Well yeah your dam right
- the only way i know to escape is to recite.
- When shit goes down my pen ignites
- and the pain is what invites
- the paper to the pen.
- The pain is gone then i read it and its back again.
- I had never fit in with the men.
- I told them keep picking on me imma run this place
- imma no longer be the disgrace to the human race.
- I'm gonna be qualified to be known worldwide.
- I have no more pride but by rap i am occupied.
- It has supplied me a personality
- i used to be full of originality.
- I have became my own person while my problems worsen.
- Well im my own version
- of marshal well only partial.
- To say i suck is kinda harsh yo
- cuz imma role model
- to the kids holding liquor bottles.
- See i escape through music i have a skill and i use it.
- I don't lean to alcohol yeah my life was bad and all.
- But i still try to set a good example
- you have a life and it cant be mishandled
- cuz you will get stomped and trampled.
- Alright just listen to me cuz i can see
- the truth to everything.
- I see through the bullshit cuz i have changed since i was a kid.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- lost in the delusional confusion of my uneducated youth
- looking for distributional contusions an unadulterated truth
- self absorbed in a dysfunctional misappropriated noose
- slinging my opinionated words dishearteningly loose, an in truth
- sometimes they needed be questioned for liability
- i lost alot of outlets, still surprised that some remain
- and i let go, to grab ahold of miss ties, were killin me
- i despised to equalize my point of view for sympathy
- until i criped an rationalized developed empathy,
- i did decide it was time to try to build a new me
- then i found friends come around try to believe
- you will drowned an make no sound if you live your life
- only for your creed