Battles  12 vs Odinson

RULES

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • In my life ive seen plenty of death and fights
  • been up plenty of endless nights.
  • I was the kid standing in the sidelights
  • people look at me as a kid that only writes.
  • Well yeah your dam right
  • the only way i know to escape is to recite.
  • When shit goes down my pen ignites
  • and the pain is what invites
  • the paper to the pen.
  • The pain is gone then i read it and its back again.
  • I had never fit in with the men.
  • I told them keep picking on me imma run this place
  • imma no longer be the disgrace to the human race.
  • I'm gonna be qualified to be known worldwide.
  • I have no more pride but by rap i am occupied.
  • It has supplied me a personality
  • i used to be full of originality.
  • I have became my own person while my problems worsen.
  • Well im my own version
  • of marshal well only partial.
  • To say i suck is kinda harsh yo
  • cuz imma role model
  • to the kids holding liquor bottles.
  • See i escape through music i have a skill and i use it.
  • I don't lean to alcohol yeah my life was bad and all.
  • But i still try to set a good example
  • you have a life and it cant be mishandled
  • cuz you will get stomped and trampled.
  • Alright just listen to me cuz i can see
  • the truth to everything.
  • I see through the bullshit cuz i have changed since i was a kid.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • lost in the delusional confusion of my uneducated youth
  • looking for distributional contusions an unadulterated truth
  • self absorbed in a dysfunctional misappropriated noose
  • slinging my opinionated words dishearteningly loose, an in truth
  • sometimes they needed be questioned for liability
  • i lost alot of outlets, still surprised that some remain
  • and i let go, to grab ahold of miss ties, were killin me
  • i despised to equalize my point of view for sympathy
  • until i criped an rationalized developed empathy,
  • i did decide it was time to try to build a new me
  • then i found friends come around try to believe
  • you will drowned an make no sound if you live your life
  • only for your creed

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