Battles JCMoldprofile vs old_
RULES
18 lines; no dissing (verse from "Dig Deeper")
Max of 18 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- No thoughts in his head, there assuming he's dead
- No words generating from his pen and looming on the lead
- "They aren't suiting" he said, missing shots for the stars like he's shooting for bed
- Resting not testing these rhymes yes he's crazy, I know
- So fucka get out there with some makings to show
- Sing for the moment while it last, hope it don't pass, fuck, lets go to the past
- A kid living, wishing this thing called nervous would stop
- He feels like murders with heads spinning
- He's sitting in a pit of conscience, praying to launch this
- But shit man, gotta tip it up and notch this
- Fear in his eye, his pupils are flooding, his new tools are muddy
- Nothing seems to work, bitch pull that out till you feel it hurt
- Okay now, back to life, out of the coma
- No more past, no last night, I'm about to show ya
- He feels on top, nobody doper, now he got his own brochure
- To these doubters he's a type of cancer with no cure
- Like fuck off, this is my destiny, so stop testing me
- Wanna bring out the best of me? Fine mothafucka
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Everyone told him that he was a lost cause,
- But at night he would dream of a stadium full of applause.
- The more that he honed in on his skills, he began to withdraw.
- Anxiety in his stomach was a feeling that would gnaw.
- Being an addict in his family was an unwritten law.
- So, he popped Xanny until his stomach began to settle.
- He would spit to his 'friends' and get heckled.
- Between friends and family he was Hyde and Jeckyll
- Hyde would take over and this boy was for sure the devil.
- Claiming to be too good for anyone, on a completely different level.
- Too artistic for anyone to understand, nobody even gave him a chance.
- All he wanted was for someone to lend him a hand.
- Misunderstood, so his depression began to expand.
- Trying to make good, but had seen so much bad firsthand.
- Soon, his pen wasn't the only weapon he liked to use.
- Picking fights, he left his body cut up and badly bruised.
- The pain felt so good each and every time that he would lose.
- Ending his life for good, but not even worth the evening news.