Battles  SpurWilly vs JSwooz

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A rap about pain...overall (no recordings)

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Yo, dis is me,
  • soo much pain in my eyes, I see,
  • a life of pity, goin' shitty, unfit the sky's bee.
  • Far unlike me, under siege, I plead,
  • that my pain will surrender, give up and let me be free.
  • Carefree under seas, rain down on my cloak,
  • show me why, show me how, I'm still choking when I woke.
  • An I,
  • let off a sigh,
  • hold in all the lies why,
  • why, I try,
  • why, I cry,
  • why, I have been living in this lie.
  • Who cares if I die,
  • if I go to Hell and fry,
  • if I seem to get lost, and just rap, myself in a tie.
  • Lift that bounty off my head since before I was even rich,
  • stiff, stop when they told me, no, I thought they just some bitch.
  • But now, if I could, I'd flip a coin to a time machine,
  • cut the distance down, and stop what was foreseen.
  • Hate to sound depressed,
  • state why I can't rest,
  • wait, and wait, and wait again to feel my chest.
  • Golden to globe,
  • no point to my bath rode,
  • I already feel exposed, released to let the public know.
  • Try to put on a good show,
  • why I cry away and grow,
  • thrown in the snow, like'a worthless piece of oh, I'll never be the same rotten,
  • oh, I'll just be forgotten,
  • so, I'll just let you know, all the pain I've gotten.
  • In my mind Insane asylum filled with cries,
  • umbrella tasked to be held high.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Yo im supposed to rap about some pain?
  • Now we can see what you're into.
  • Depressed, slit wrist
  • Im sorry i have to add to what you been through
  • I drop some bars on ya head, Now ICU, mental.
  • Left ya ass bent dude,
  • Like the position you was in,
  • When uncle tom went in you.
  • Leavin him weepin
  • Stuffin klonopins in you.
  • Stabbin, leaving you holy.
  • Didnt mean to get sinful
  • All kinds of evil,
  • I mean shit, i got bins full.
  • Aye, you asked for the pain
  • So i didnt bring gentle.

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