Battles  PoetProductions vs BaSikJoneZ1986

RULES

write a verse in 5 minutes and it must be 16 lines min, lines must be FULL not 4 words. mine is 29. No Other Rules go Ham

Max of 30 lines

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Got this new meat stepping to the table
  • Bout to be beat made into a fable
  • Feeble minded rhymes not on time with
  • The beat at all its like Marty stop the timer
  • We got this dirty rotten rhymer sliming beats
  • With acetone listen to the asshole he knows how to speak
  • Got that speech its crystal clear while your shit is to weak
  • You work for two weeks and still sound like a cruel freak
  • Murdering the beat with your tone you shouldn't be permitted to speak
  • Committed to Arkam and muzzled like Bleak
  • Shackled and chained your deranged to think you got fame
  • Fathom insane wonder what goes on in that brain, not game
  • You not the Hot Potato you more like Mrs. Potato Head
  • You stepping to the Plato of rhyme you Fandango your dead
  • Made of the Play Dough this time you fags know what said
  • Play with your Tonka Trucks you fucks don't know lyrics instead
  • I hear it ears bled ten seconds of your shit I whished I was dead
  • Double up on the same lines cuz it takes that to say fine
  • Hay don't wine cuz you took it all up to the nine
  • With two cylinders lightly tapping up on your behind
  • Im rapping this is blind every line committed in one time
  • No take backs of fixing the mistakes its all to fine
  • And dandy you lost looking for your best friend Andy
  • You and Randy are off to fuck another hooker tranny
  • Sandy Beached with Colfax and a bucked of bleach its
  • Not enough of a secret so why do I subliminally speak this
  • What I mean is, you can kill a hooker bury her you still wont know what a G is

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • now watch me run this to the finish like I'm "USAIN BOLT" -
  • you don't got am-nesia but you act like you ain't know -
  • my mouth a waterfall and I spit that Ni-a-gara flow -
  • my Barz hard, even without a Vi-a-gara dose -
  • it's kinda funny how I rap and make a laughable quote -
  • like April 1st, you a Fool and I'm the Practical Joke -
  • im the "terminator" you just a mechanical hoax -
  • like a car that can fly, you real irrational bro -
  • so ungrammatical but I still speak spectacular though -
  • cause my vernacular automatically tempts em the most -
  • I make em kneel to the ground like they about to propose -
  • I'm the coldest nigga 'round like the top of the globe -
  • or the top of the earth, where the Eskimo roam -
  • when I turn up I'm not talkin bout my stereo tone -
  • I got my pin game down like I'm "MATT HUGHES" -
  • they go nuts when I rap like some cashews-
  • I'm monumental in this bitch like a statue -
  • what I write is permanent like a tattoo -

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