Battles  raptoworld vs Rockstar510

RULES

no cursing do not mock

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • am 11 yrs. old am a good girl due to my name its melody like a parody you see how
  • the the beat
  • flow that's how my name go
  • It's been 3 yrs. since you left us father, what did we do so wrong what we do to bad?
  • this is my question In earth, as it is in heaven may you have the strength
  • But I'd just rather 2-step, like my first steps
  • So u better take a couple steps back, to where we began like were on world tour
  • And this is DC where the rich see the poor
  • The poor stay poor, only the rich get status look at these channel bags what a
  • bad habbit you can fix it up but you not there what a sad man
  • but if you aint real man, what is your plan now
  • I hope you have a great day, but remember what you did because
  • when the day end you will relise what your missing.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • You want to do a blind battle?
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  • When you lose, your afraid you will look stupid as cattle.
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  • You wanna hear salt?
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  • This raps about to put your career to a halt!
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  • You got a microphone,
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  • but no speaker...
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  • Cause every second, your rhymes are getting weaker,
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  • You think you're lil wayne, yet you sound like John Mccain.
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  • Everyone who reads your rap is in great pain!
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  • Give me an ear.
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  • Give me a beer.
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  • Give me your time and a lesson you'll endear.
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  • Try to use more than one syllable,
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  • Instead of using death, use killable.
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  • You think you're a whole "'nother spread",
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  • Sounds like your girlfriend giving me head!
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  • Your lack of punctuation,
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  • Is an immediate Implication,
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  • Of your complete Decimation...

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