Battles ATOMIKKT vs Laylow13
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Sounds of the wind's whispers come on this cold day/
- Looking around to find some comfort, sky's looks almost grey/
- Although it's early May, day's look bleak because you passed away/
- Unexpected, they say time fly's, must be so since your soul couldn't stay/
- My heart feel's a sharp pain, death always win's, little feeling's remain/
- Its been hard trying to explain to my daughter the sadness we obtain/
- Not everyday does someone just leave, and no longer breathe/
- No matter how many pleas are given to god, we can only grieve/
- The world's feeling so unloving and cold, temp's -100 degrees/
- Today's the day my family receives your ashes, to bury in the dirt/
- Heard a bird tweets, nothings changed though, heading to the church/
- Gotta sing your praises to the high heavens, love his creations/
- Even sang for you today, only go to those place's on special occasions/
- Feeling a guilt, an unfilled feeling that says I wasn't by your side/
- Not my fault yes, but as we all continue to cry, I start to get better inside/
- The mere fact that you're gone, equals a heart stabbed by a spear/
- But i'll be clear, the feeling's will end, it's only been a bad year/
- Cause that tear that ran down my face, gives me hope/
- That even though your not here with me, i'll be able to cope/
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Sorry mamma, I might not be a schola
- The mind of the George Washington is all about the dolla,I ain't even got a high school deploma
- My everyday persona was we the roma
- Slangin on the corna for jobs do not deny
- Some day i'll reply, do not deny the words of the shy, And turn the magazines into fly
- Now I ain't saying i'm better than nobody
- But I remember my same dues was nobody
- They say love can only concur hate
- It's like my conscience don't wanna give me a break, wait
- I'm just falling on my glass, and waiting for a break
- Because in this life you can't beat death nor fate
- I do this for dem people locked in the cells, that are dying to get to heaven cause
- were living in hell
- I'm good with my John Hancock you can't tell
- My flow is like James Knox, for when he got thrown in the well
- But I am really sorry lord, I wasn't in Sunday Service
- Getting caught up, every time I get to the churches
- Being wealthy thats what my dream is
- Wanna be able to give a grand to my grandkids And even if you try and stop my blood flow
- Through my music I remain immortal