Battles  TwoOneEight vs ItsTheory

RULES

write about the person you never had

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Battle on March 23 2014 and Battle on March 29 2014

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • We met back in 8th grade never made a move,
  • i was to afraid, we clicked instantly,
  • a friendship was made, 2 years passed ,
  • she finally got me gassed, i liked her,
  • we barely saw each other,
  • but text sessions lasted forever,
  • she sent me poetry, the girl was clever,
  • she was so hot, i swear she had a fever,
  • she broke up with her boy friend, its my time together we can shine,
  • next thing i know she has a new on my chance is done,
  • months go by, im two thousand miles away,
  • she gives me a phone call jus to say hey,
  • i feel the feelings again, instently grab a pen writing letters,
  • back and fourth she wines bout her man, i just wanna smash his head with a can,
  • i wanna protect her but i cant,
  • so i stay up late imagining a fight that started with a rant,
  • whyd my parents move me, me and my love could have been free,
  • we chat everyday for hours, i debate having a friend send her flowers,
  • shes got me hooked like she has super powers,
  • she breaks up with that rude dude, we talk more and more,
  • i dont dare be disrespectful shes not a whore,
  • we text a lot this girl has me caught, pretty inside and out,
  • i know what shes about, till i log onto facebook, shes back with whats his name,
  • fucker dont even have game, i hate him his head i wanna trim,
  • my angers at the brim,
  • she stops callin,
  • she stops textin,
  • she stops lovin,
  • now im stuck here with a paper and pen just writing to NOTHING.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • //VERSE 1:
  • Your game plan brought to this race, man was weak,
  • look like James Vanderbeek on eight grams of tweak,
  • watch the flow #trickle #down like an older Ronald Reagan,
  • bite the #steely, #damn, like Walt Becker or Donald Fagen,
  • I can't wait 'till you #drop #dead like Ritchie Valens,
  • my rhymes are brake lights on #late #nights, Jimmy Fallon,
  • rappers here's your #vanishing #point like Barry Newman,
  • you're #presidential but #you #don't #do #shit like Harry Truman,
  • hard as mortars, guard the borders, hide the farmer daughters,
  • because I'll be barking orders like I'm Sergeant Slaughter,
  • keep this passage coming, get the #shaft like Gordon Parks,
  • Superdome's the #battlefield, call this shit Jordin Sparks,
  • light this shit up like Christmas trees on Michael Jackson,
  • leave you with those #battle #scars like you're Guy Sebastian,
  • I #go #beast inside this shit like those Tyrannosaurus Rex,
  • I slaughter foes, #you #oughta #know, Alanis Morrisette,

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