Battles  AbStrakt vs Tithe

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

Tithe won this battle!

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Battle on February 24 2014

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • smothered in ether creeping around bleachers,
  • looking for a victim hiding underground i see ya,
  • slowly i approach barely breathe'n not making a sound,
  • slitting your throat cut ya to pieces eating your insides out,
  • rejoining the pieces after turning you inside out,
  • inside or out I'm running around town with a gouge looking for victims to gouge,
  • separate your throat from your spout licking my nuts with your tongue i cut out,
  • what now? ill stick it back in sew it on upside down like a sad clown,
  • no need to frown unless you want me to carve triple six under your scalp,
  • remove your mouth then glue it on to fix that frown, happy now?
  • by the time I'm done you'll look like heath ledger mixed with andrew lloyd webber,
  • the thing, sally struthers, and rob reiner combined together,
  • bringing a new definition to looking under the weather,
  • so many throats i won't know which one to sever,
  • oh well the more the better,

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • That's some serious shit you're getting delirious with
  • Fearing the sheering nearing your resilient wits
  • You feeling the tip of the scalpel disappear into bits
  • Of your forehead, before meds' dizziness hits
  • See, I want to see the mind of an Abstrakt being
  • On the path psychos flee in zig zag, seeing
  • Saws teeter into tendons, tending to the meat and
  • Flesh left from the peeling, stringing on the sheet ends
  • I hope you receive every nerve signal as I urge needles
  • In my works feeble remains as it remains on my first easel
  • A living masterpiece, demonstrating the fate after peace
  • With your sins, since you're convinced your stature's 'peased
  • On your dying breath, you dumb fuck, that doesn't matter, pain
  • Doesn't begin to describe the vibes when I abstract your scattered brain

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