Battles  -ian- vs PoetProductions

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-ian- won this battle!

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • You didn't know what you were getting into when y'all signed up
  • you posted for this card thinking you had the dance all lined up
  • PoetP floods battles, but now the diluted deluge is all dried up
  • I dissect your Art of the Kill, leave you denuded and all tied up
  • you agreed to take this battle? are you concussed? have confusion?
  • I crack open your skull to find out, scoop out some pus, see contusions
  • so I lobotomize then cauterize the skewed ideas with caution
  • burning them like Iverson, I cross 'em up like #God's #Son
  • my Destiny spears your #Belly, watered down verses fly like tears cried
  • I drown out your pathetic poetics with the boom my beat rides
  • heavy hooks leave you shook, I fire up the globe with these elite lines
  • shoulder the smoldering atlas, drop the Earth on your deceased rhymes
  • 'cuz every angle you take in every hook that you shape
  • is reel fishy in delivery I can't be lured to this wake
  • your funeral impending, lady liberty laying in state
  • your void words hang in space, punchlines literally staying in place
  • Kid, just look at the tobacco chewed verses you spewed and threw here
  • no heat, no curves, no change ups--you spittoon nothing new here
  • and soon each battler on deck reads and sees you've no clue here
  • hang 'em up kid, you've not improved since your rookie debut here
  • 'cuz I'm toying with you, this is a game to me
  • cats-cradling this victim, strung out like a dame roofied
  • #throwing #ropes on you like a spider that #came to feed
  • turned your insides into liquid, lit it and spat flame loogies
  • I burn you with my spray and brand your skin with my battle scarred barcode
  • scan it with an app, you see you're cargo in a cattle car cart load
  • prod you along with hot iron verses wrought from the words honed
  • by the slow-lined bovine battlers now merely IanDroid herd drones
  • so PoetP, about your poetry, you think we really believe you?
  • and not see how you repeatedly and evilly deceive too?
  • with your "freestyles" really "key-styles" with Ctrl C & V freely used
  • who here don't perceive that PoetReductions be obstructin' the real truth?

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • You must be out of your fucking mental mind
  • To think you can attack an asinine mind such as mine
  • I'm looking at your Avatar and all I see is half a star
  • A hundred bucks you bring it vicious to show how bad you are
  • But what's suspicious is you know how sad your bars
  • Sound when you spit its like it comes right off the top
  • When you spend hours with a thesaurus in the night its soft so stop
  • Your at a loss fighting with the halter-top but just cant get it off
  • I'll get you off the same way I did your mother you faggot but my dick went soft
  • So this is where I twist my top loos lips with racism just to piss you off
  • Listen to your lisp is it natural, nope, from sucking dick with Todd
  • Your uncle Jacks got you laid pumping you in the back full with sap
  • I'm the Heisenberg totting a 50 Cal tearing holes in your rap so full of crap
  • This is a whole other fact I got a headache but I'm still ill with a slap
  • I can be a limp wrist and you a gangster your still a fag in a cap
  • So listen up this is where I mix it up get your mother to piss in a cup
  • Drink it then play stinky fish with your sister "hay Mista you missed the
  • Boat your just to old you fucking wish ta be an evil genius like this hipsta"
  • I'm a rhyme twister intertwine the lines like a mastermind Minister
  • The one to administer the Dillinger of rhyme, Don of a Gangster sinister
  • Thanks for dinner Sir you filled me up time to shit you out
  • Wondering what the fuck your thinking to think you would ever win this bout
  • I'm the type to go in the ring and not come out till I knock em' out
  • So when you talk you better think before you speak, watch your fucking mouth
  • I'm at the top of the game no one to stop me on a whole other plane
  • Playing fields green when you see nothing but gray as your sole shutters in pain
  • As I rhyme around you like your mother on a pole shatter your brain
  • Drive you batters insane come on dawg what's the matter with pain
  • Is it sadder in vain of being made another mans bitch like he and Roy
  • Weren't sucking and fucking each other, "what's his name?" you ask, oh, LeanOnMeBoy
  • Popping steroids to be a big boy but you another mans boy toy he employed
  • To be his ploy he goes to and you like your ass destroyed this is what you cant avoid IanDroid

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