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CHALLENGER'S RAP
This rap was deleted.DEFENDER'S RAP
- I'm gonna come hard in this one, rise up and then blow
- but not in your girl, though she be open to my flow
- or in your mom, even though she begging to be consoled
- so I hold her in my arms as she peaks then breathlessly speaks of your woes
- helplessly telling me she tried to warn you that you shouldn't compose
- but insistent you resisted but still no poetry just prose
- more persistent in time spent reflecting on a pose
- as you mirror all the stances and gestures of the pros
- but don't you know it's the stanzas and fresh verses you should load
- in the barrels packed and ready to be emptied into your foes?
- but you don't, you don't have it--in this you're just not predisposed
- so I'ma disclose your flaws to all, leave you fully exposed
- as you blow dull smoke, I fire up a blunt and toss you some clothes
- you ain't sharp, the notes you put up fall flat decomposed
- this music, you abuse it and you can't refute that you froze
- when you tried to lock eyes with me, they closed and I drew X's and Odes