Battles 12 vs TwoOneEight
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- she lived with me my whole life and the night she died i sat up and i cried she told
- me not to and man i tried and i cant deny it i felt like a helpless kid i needed
- someone to hold me cuz i was crying uncontrollably and she told me to stay
- strong never do wrong and i miss her even more now that shes gone.so only to
- you i dedicate this song and im trying to move on. I just hope when you left you
- didnt feel a thing but until i know in my mind i here this little ring and i think of
- you every time it rings and since you left nothing has been the same but
- i just need to know that you felt no pain. Then all of a sudden it gets silent
- i close my eyelids start praying then i hear this voice saying my name and
- its saying (Eminems chorus)
- i start thinking to myself did i really here that or do i need help no i have never
- felt the way i feel man my whole life just all of a sudden got real. So every night
- i bend my head and kneal and pray that i am thankful for every meal.
- You taught me to deal with what i got and to never steal. You taught me to
- appreciate what i have and never mouth back even if i get mad
- even if he doesnt have my back yeah my very own dad and when i was
- sad you were there for me and you showed me how to live my
- life carefully and to stand up for my self and not be a bully and to
- live my life fully. You taught me to not get involved with the drugs and alchohal
- i was gonna try it but then i was getting pulled away then i started praying and
- i was right back on my knees like the other day and there was this
- voice in my head saying my name and it was saying (Eminems Chorus)
DEFENDER'S RAP
- gazing at me as i start raising myself to fame,
- i know im amazing, thats why more people should be embracing,
- as i sit here erasing line after line, redoing rhyme after rhyme,
- i have my friend, whos a bit of a fiend, setting up my recording equipment,
- so i can finally start my mixtape, dont even have to decorate, the cover, itll be so popular,
- hand out free cds at walmart and school, end up becoming the coolest fool there is,
- rapping is an art in my eyes, rockers screamin lies,
- while im on stage engaging the crowd, creating music thats really loud,
- every battle i try hard, i somehow replace my depression, with extreme aggression,
- i dont spit on my opponents,i devour my opponents, tearing em up with my clever components,
- im the greatest thing to come, since jesus came back,
- ive been to hell, yes, i have many stories to tell, such as the way satan starts to yell,
- god created my body but satan filled it, i have a heavenly look,
- but the inside of my body is the exact reincarnation of satan,
- play the simulation, ill show you the insides of satans creation,
- stop as you can see, this is a guy who will never be free,
- always committing crimes always selling dime, while hes trying to spit rhymes,
- but itll never work out because he is half angel and half evil.