Battles  blackmanTondux vs chuck

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • ill take a piss, im constipated nigga 'i dont give a shit'
  • catch me pissin on your grave, left you lifeless where you sit
  • im legit, when i rap i try to rhyme a little bit
  • bitch they call me Mr Pitiful like Otis Redding's hit
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  • heres a tip, make some sense before you write and hit submit
  • and when youre working on a lyric know its whack as you commit
  • you should listen to the niggas that be asking you to quit
  • bitch you suck, ill call you out cuz youre not willing to admit
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  • its amazing how i write my rhymes and consonants just fit
  • its like im flowing like a river with these lyrics that i spit
  • i was charged with killin beats, i never managed to acquit
  • so for now ill spit this acapella, hella dope, legit
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  • theyre saying im the factor yeah theyre saying that im it
  • while you can never capture all these spirits that i lift
  • im spittin all these lyrics with extraordinary wit
  • and now ive spit these 16 bars, its time for me to split

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