Battles  Silvershine vs Akse

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Write a rap about being reborn

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Everything I do is heavy, I don't let much shit upset me
  • Guessing I was made for blessing
  • All the things I've been confessing
  • Bringing back a lighter dressing
  • Of the words I spill is messier
  • I'm sure there's a cure for the illest i've been stressing
  • Pressing on for sure don't let me build up on that sound protesting
  • All around the town gets fresher when I'm drowning out the fester
  • Pestering my mind, It's like it happens all the time
  • Me falling, calling for the light, reaching till it's out of site
  • No doubt in my fight, hear me out until tonight
  • It tears me down, but still I write
  • Feeling the heat around mic
  • Eyes are focused, nothing's hopless, exposing meaning till my eyes are bleeding!
  • I am seeing red, want me to die? I'm already dead!
  • Haunts me inside, taunts me till I am calling all to realize
  • There's a fine line and it splits in time!
  • Simple things that get left behind!
  • I feel the shivers down my spine
  • When I walk I hear their cries!
  • Are they talking or am I?
  • Do they lie so I might feel exposed or closed off in spite of the lyrics I may write?
  • Who am I to just lye here, I must rise on my own, I chose to die here all alone!
  • Who are they to call this Home?
  • I may be broken but I know there's a better place to go!
  • I'm not fit here, I won't sit here as this form
  • I will lift and be reborn
  • And forget that ever I was torn!

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • i know how it feels, being reborn and renewed
  • happens kinda often when i'm torn and confused
  • but about being saved, well it happens all the time
  • storms brew and they rage, and i get thrown way off the line
  • off the grid, kind of cause the next one's hid
  • can't get rid of my weakness, chains i'm amid
  • proverbial flow, parables and pharisees are kind of distant
  • flying low, profound insight says that we're a bunch of kids, and
  • human insight says that we're all a little inconsistent
  • the bible says that we all need God in the face of distance
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  • i ain't a theologian but i just want to say
  • there's a ton of hate and turning people off that christians convey
  • if you've been reborn, that don't make you master race
  • that just show that you discern that you keep falling on your face
  • ain't the time or place, to give a lesson on theology
  • excuse me for speaking, but i wanted to share doxologies
  • no offense to you, christians are meant to live in harmony
  • a little inconsistent, i'm just tired of monotony

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