Battles  Redacted vs LilSaint

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THIS BATTLE IS OVER

This battle ended in a tie.

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Battle on January 29 2017

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • You influenced me to become a rapper/
  • Ruthless cold blooded attacker/
  • You were my biggest factor/
  • My rhymes are faster than a raptor/
  • For a while I was an imitator/
  • Tried to rap then you threw my lyrics in the incinerator/
  • I was like screw that lets talk/
  • Gettin the hanga things/
  • But you where prepared for my mood swings/
  • Handled it like a evil genius mastermind/
  • If I'm a redneck the rap is my moonshine/
  • If I'm Eminem then your Dr.Dre/
  • Look at what I got myself into/
  • At the time you were my one man crew/
  • But your one of the reasons my hatred and anger grew/
  • When I was down, you brought me up/
  • Then I pulled the wrong lever, hit self destruct/
  • But your attitude brought me toward/
  • I'm so good I should get an award/
  • I'm a knight and my rhymes is my sword/
  • Well I gotta go/
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  • Haha wait, No/
  • You were but now I'm commando/
  • I'm the tornado/
  • Your gettin too old becoming slow/
  • Your so called kingdom I will overthrow/
  • Look I thank you for all that you've done/
  • But my reign as king has only begun/
  • Me you will never outrun/
  • I know where you are at all times, your parolee/
  • I'm destroying you verbally/
  • Get ready for the big finale/
  • But your imaginary/
  • Inside my mind just pullin out the rapper in me,I was able to foresee/
  • Me comin out as a rapper/
  • Hey I stole your suite hope you dont mind, dont I look dapper?/
  • I'm done with you, you done raised me right/
  • Chill man why are you so uptight?/
  • You jealous cuz I became internet's sensation overnight/
  • Hahaha, well maybe you shoulda thought about me joining rap/
  • Guess what man this world is mine now/
  • Taking it away you showed me how/
  • I emit my own energy/
  • Pssst, I studied in criminology/
  • You aint even close to sadistic/
  • Me, you don't know what I'll do/
  • I'm something you should wish you could undo I'm destroying you/
  • Did you forget that I am the only one who can?/
  • I control you and everything you decide to do/
  • I've made you my puppet/
  • You better bow down/
  • Or be welcomed to my battleground/
  • I'm the enemy inbound/
  • Go hideaway underground/
  • Its where you belong/
  • My reign is lifelong/
  • And its about time you disappear/
  • Go hide away in fear/
  • Well I gotta go kill someone/
  • And its you, say goodbye to me and hello to my handgun/
  • Look away bro POW POW POW.
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  • Goodbye old friend.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Wow man after all that I taught you/
  • Big mistake for Imma roast ya like a barbecue/
  • You think Imma big softy well that must be untrue/
  • If alls I do squash all those who even look at me funny/
  • When I'm done with this battle I'm gonna make you remember what you
  • did wrong/
  • Bro I helped you out with your first three songs/
  • And this is how you gonna return the favor?/
  • But hey its all good it'll finally give you some manual labor/
  • So long me so called friend and neighbor/
  • Your heart gets broken every week like Taylor Swift/
  • Hahaha and yet you still persist/
  • Here's a dose of your childhood/
  • You keep acting like it's all good/
  • You had this comin/
  • I'm the real gentlemen/
  • You are feminine/
  • Quit acting like you are Eminem/
  • You'll never be as good as him/
  • I was your role model you say/
  • Well the fact is DRAY/
  • You can't rap as good as me, you just wont be/
  • A real professional rapper, just stay on Rappad/
  • So you can practice your skills/
  • Or wait you dont have any/
  • Dude you suck so bad you can't properly use profanity/
  • Man for your sake I hope they give out classes to rap/
  • They'll use ya as a lab rat/
  • When you stand on stage there'll be no one in the crowd only mommie/
  • Your gonna lose this battle just like Mitt Romney/
  • I don't need a long rap to wreck you/
  • Your lies man how much they grew/
  • I hope they teach you how to rap in class/
  • Cuz quite frankly I'm sick n' tired of whoopin your ass...

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