Battles RivR vs -ian-
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THIS BATTLE IS OVER
-ian- won this battle!
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Battle on November 2 2015
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Take a good look in my eyes
- I'm standing on a field, full of land mines
- Dont depend on ya weapon, it aint better than mine is
- I'm a mother fucking force to be reckoned with
- at least your momma said i have a 9 inch
- Cause I was never hesitant to represent it
- Those other people that never leave a dent in the planet
- Put your whole goddamn career in a fucking casket
- It's disastrous, I'm laughin', your lack of talent's a casket
- Put a stick of dynamite in it and blow it the hell up
- Go nuts, instrumental flow much
- I feel invisible
- I ain't something of an original
- I don't even think i've reached the pinnacle
- Insomnia is driving me mental, this insomnia that's chronic
- I make everything more appealing regardless of the topic.
- imma chronic abuser, a user of fuckin' ganga
- and if you wanna, then i'll show you some marijuana
- I feel kind of invincible, my eyes are red
- Head first in that goddamn river, now you're dead
- Wait, you wanna fuckin' drown? well, Go ahead
- No ones gonna stop you, i guess
- My vision isn't set on the money I get
- get something, i don't give a shit
- back the fuck off man you about to get hit
- i dont give a shit, couldn't give two flying fucks
- and even if i did, you wouldn't stand this shit with us
- it seems that i just bust a nut in your moms butt
- To Be Continued...
DEFENDER'S RAP
- you're a phony Dannybot you bit my lines last time you owe me
- for giving you exposure from my taking this battle, shorty
- I'll show you what happens when a boy meets a man
- like when a toy tries to scam like they the king that burned a wall with their racked cans
- you gotta understand, I've been in this game awhile
- building bars in silence until I could find a voice to trial
- and errors may have come and weak bars may have broke
- but son you have no currency, you pretending and blowing smoke
- "but Droid," you say "don't i have to play and try to hit hard in this way?"
- "don't I have to fill my rhymes with bitches, thuggin' and gun play?"
- so you trot it all out here acting like gat-clapping is like breathing
- and yet you only gangbang the keyboard typing hard in your rhyme-scheming
- so boy, be who you gotta be, but just believe that I will read
- between the lines and see the lies, the truth so easy to perceive
- see a true rapper tends to wear their heart on their sleeve
- and with each beat they bleed their heat forging bars that make you weak
- see them seek the perfect lines they retool and tweak
- you tool, the only tweaking you do is when you play the speed freak
- and in your confused delusion you imagine yourself as an emcee?
- child please, you're a thief, get off the smack you've clearly cracked your sanity