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Battle on November 2 2015

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Take a good look in my eyes
  • I'm standing on a field, full of land mines
  • Dont depend on ya weapon, it aint better than mine is
  • I'm a mother fucking force to be reckoned with
  • at least your momma said i have a 9 inch
  • Cause I was never hesitant to represent it
  • Those other people that never leave a dent in the planet
  • Put your whole goddamn career in a fucking casket
  • It's disastrous, I'm laughin', your lack of talent's a casket
  • Put a stick of dynamite in it and blow it the hell up
  • Go nuts, instrumental flow much
  • I feel invisible
  • I ain't something of an original
  • I don't even think i've reached the pinnacle
  • Insomnia is driving me mental, this insomnia that's chronic
  • I make everything more appealing regardless of the topic.
  • imma chronic abuser, a user of fuckin' ganga
  • and if you wanna, then i'll show you some marijuana
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  • I feel kind of invincible, my eyes are red
  • Head first in that goddamn river, now you're dead
  • Wait, you wanna fuckin' drown? well, Go ahead
  • No ones gonna stop you, i guess
  • My vision isn't set on the money I get
  • get something, i don't give a shit
  • back the fuck off man you about to get hit
  • i dont give a shit, couldn't give two flying fucks
  • and even if i did, you wouldn't stand this shit with us
  • it seems that i just bust a nut in your moms butt
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  • To Be Continued...

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • you're a phony Dannybot you bit my lines last time you owe me
  • for giving you exposure from my taking this battle, shorty
  • I'll show you what happens when a boy meets a man
  • like when a toy tries to scam like they the king that burned a wall with their racked cans
  • you gotta understand, I've been in this game awhile
  • building bars in silence until I could find a voice to trial
  • and errors may have come and weak bars may have broke
  • but son you have no currency, you pretending and blowing smoke
  • "but Droid," you say "don't i have to play and try to hit hard in this way?"
  • "don't I have to fill my rhymes with bitches, thuggin' and gun play?"
  • so you trot it all out here acting like gat-clapping is like breathing
  • and yet you only gangbang the keyboard typing hard in your rhyme-scheming
  • so boy, be who you gotta be, but just believe that I will read
  • between the lines and see the lies, the truth so easy to perceive
  • see a true rapper tends to wear their heart on their sleeve
  • and with each beat they bleed their heat forging bars that make you weak
  • see them seek the perfect lines they retool and tweak
  • you tool, the only tweaking you do is when you play the speed freak
  • and in your confused delusion you imagine yourself as an emcee?
  • child please, you're a thief, get off the smack you've clearly cracked your sanity

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