Battles M11M vs LayZ
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- She left when it started to rain
- The pain grew and grew till there was nothing left of you
- Only sorrow was left and knew our love was past overdue.
- Miracles only happen when god is in alignment with your soul
- But a soul such as mine had a hole about as big as a pot hole
- Wishing things could go back to the way they was, dreaming of a better day
- Had me thinking could i have done this any other way
- So I locked up my heart
- Opened the car door waited till 4 , Floored it down the road going 85
- Knowing the next moments i could not survive .
- Why you left
- Why i died
- Was me dieing twice over
- It was finally done and in my last moments I had closure.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- you said "But a soul such as mine had a hole about as big as a pot hole",
- oh yeah well i'll hit you with a ski pole as big as a big ski pole,
- that's the level of writing that you used for that line,
- i'm planning to be the best better then shotty horror, tony d or k-shine,
- cause when it comes down to it limitations are something I redefine,
- it's like I paid charon for a return trip that makes me neo cause I came back to life when I died,
- but previous losses mean I got good enough to beat you so there is an upside,
- not that I need to good to beat you, my knowledge is power and i've got more then anyone worldwide.
- wrote this super quick so battle wouldn't be taken.