SyllableSeb vs -ian-

Battles SyllableSeb vs -ian-

Straight Dissing. Nothing personal :P

Max of 20 lines

-ian- won this battle!

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

call me the rubbish man cause I've come to take out the trash,
you ain't the shit if you smell like it you just needa wipe yo ass,
I would give you props on raps but your shit is queer see,
you wouldn't know what a multi syllable rhyme was if you spit the dictionary,
the reason you're still a virgin is cause of your small dick,
you couldn't pick up a white girl if you had wifi on a forklift
so talk shit, I called it,
by the time I'm done you'll forfeit,
Ill have you running laps around me sun as if you was in orbit,
but the only reason your raps are whack is because you didn't planet,
you disappear down yo mums blackhole until you vanished,
lets stop talking about space cause you take it all up,
had your bitch in my basement with all doors shut, with her on all fours fucked,
inside my all whores hut,
you could catch the flu still you'l never be iller,
the only reason there's crack in your house is cause you're looking in the mirror,
so here I am asking myself why you rap bad,
you just a pedophile looking for these children on Rappad,
so before I start showing off and starting a scene,
Ima finish by calling you a dick cause you are what you eat,

Challenger

DEFENDER'S RAP

a tradition passed down in time sees the youth surpass the elder
but you're just a child, nuts aint dropped, don't harass this rhyme-welder
because I craft bars in a smithy and disbar pretenders with the gavel
hammering and hammering, you can't touch this and begin to unravel
so go ahead, dust off your best lines and your top rhymes
so mislead in thinking you can test mine--better stop time
to practice your craft, rehearsing verse after verse
honing each heckle, researching curse after curse
unfortunately reality doesn't give you this needed lead
so I'ma body you lyrically, leave your family bereaved
reveal the weak seed they birthed, the disappointment hits hard
seal the bleak casket and into the hearse with those shit bars
your eulogy is like a litany of diseased verbal deeds
your parents flinch visibly as the preacher reads from the lines you've conceive
an awkward silence follows, the audience appalled
haul the coffin to the grave site, I watch the tossed earth fall
now I'll pull you from the earth, reverse the curse of your demise
build you a new foundation, help shape the rhymes you now devise
fashion you after my own image, setting the new bar(s) high
your passion rising with the skills I imparted when I gave you new life

Defender