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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • what does it take to reach the heights tradition sets before us
  • who knows the stakes to teach the right ambition sets toward lust
  • thus we go in this world clutching at slipping dreams
  • all the while worrying and hurled by wind ripping at the seams
  • the little shards of light shine less and less in the days
  • what fickle regard for right minds and they stress in most ways
  • it's hard to ignite fire when the weariness sits so charred
  • and it's far from light-inspired when the bleariness hits so hard
  • children see the world in a way to which we've become blind
  • thusly hindered we hurl away a view good for a healthy mind
  • we gladly step into our shackles and walk into our prisons
  • and sadly pep our hackles and talk when we should listen
  • enamoured with our own voices to the point we are deafened
  • and we tampered with our own choices to the point we are lessened
  • and thus diminished we finished or wishing for ambition
  • and transitioned our unfinished desires into submission
  • so then listen my friend I'm gonna pull you from your troubles
  • so just give in when I run a system to burst the bubble
  • that you have built to serve as a refuge for your pain
  • the guilt strains reserves deluged you can't maintain
  • so you need the options presented by an outside source
  • and to heed the cautions extended by an allied source
  • I want to give you the chance to flourish and to thrive
  • to be alive and romanced and nourish by the drive
  • toward a day that sees consistent rise in your condition
  • set forward unafraid and confident with ambition
  • here's a chance to shake the ashes that weigh down your shoulders
  • a proffered hand to ease the aches that stay around and smoulder
  • though it seem merely a foothold on a gigantic climb
  • and severely angled to behold for a panicked mind
  • know I'll support your movement upward and push to raise the line
  • and I'll report your improvement forward when you need a space to shine

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Ballin watch me flick (wrists)
  • Break yo neck and twist (switch)
  • Shot him with a shotty watch that floppy body flip (tricks)
  • Rhymes are unforgettable
  • Dumb it down or technical?
  • Either way I'm straight up to the point
  • Like a decimal
  • Ain't talkin heavy metal
  • my vocabulary hardcore
  • Got yo bitch breathin hard like Darth Vader
  • Star wars
  • Now you by yourself
  • No bitch
  • Done stole yours
  • All up on her lips like a mfkin cold sore
  • All the bitches on my dick
  • I'm stuntin like that
  • You hella fuckin jealous
  • Cannot run it like that
  • Couple months in
  • I'm makin hunits like that
  • Bouta make bands
  • And my money tight (yeah)

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