Battles -ian- vs DiVrGeNc
RULES
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- what does it take to reach the heights tradition sets before us
- who knows the stakes to teach the right ambition sets toward lust
- thus we go in this world clutching at slipping dreams
- all the while worrying and hurled by wind ripping at the seams
- the little shards of light shine less and less in the days
- what fickle regard for right minds and they stress in most ways
- it's hard to ignite fire when the weariness sits so charred
- and it's far from light-inspired when the bleariness hits so hard
- children see the world in a way to which we've become blind
- thusly hindered we hurl away a view good for a healthy mind
- we gladly step into our shackles and walk into our prisons
- and sadly pep our hackles and talk when we should listen
- enamoured with our own voices to the point we are deafened
- and we tampered with our own choices to the point we are lessened
- and thus diminished we finished or wishing for ambition
- and transitioned our unfinished desires into submission
- so then listen my friend I'm gonna pull you from your troubles
- so just give in when I run a system to burst the bubble
- that you have built to serve as a refuge for your pain
- the guilt strains reserves deluged you can't maintain
- so you need the options presented by an outside source
- and to heed the cautions extended by an allied source
- I want to give you the chance to flourish and to thrive
- to be alive and romanced and nourish by the drive
- toward a day that sees consistent rise in your condition
- set forward unafraid and confident with ambition
- here's a chance to shake the ashes that weigh down your shoulders
- a proffered hand to ease the aches that stay around and smoulder
- though it seem merely a foothold on a gigantic climb
- and severely angled to behold for a panicked mind
- know I'll support your movement upward and push to raise the line
- and I'll report your improvement forward when you need a space to shine
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Ballin watch me flick (wrists)
- Break yo neck and twist (switch)
- Shot him with a shotty watch that floppy body flip (tricks)
- Rhymes are unforgettable
- Dumb it down or technical?
- Either way I'm straight up to the point
- Like a decimal
- Ain't talkin heavy metal
- my vocabulary hardcore
- Got yo bitch breathin hard like Darth Vader
- Star wars
- Now you by yourself
- No bitch
- Done stole yours
- All up on her lips like a mfkin cold sore
- All the bitches on my dick
- I'm stuntin like that
- You hella fuckin jealous
- Cannot run it like that
- Couple months in
- I'm makin hunits like that
- Bouta make bands
- And my money tight (yeah)