Battles Critic vs AYE1HUNID
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Hello I am Critic, just a lyrical genius
- Play kick ball with Mars, marbles with Pluto and Venus
- Take a little breather, let the beat trickle in
- I am not a rapper, just a smooth lyricist
- Me without a mic, is like a beat without a snare
- Sweeter than licorice, yet dangerous like syphilis
- What the fuck he saying, yo he isn't the best?
- Just sit down and listen, put my rhymes to the test
- I grew up pretty easy, listened to 2pac and Biggie
- They are forever gone, but their souls are still with me
- Got a feeling in my funny bone, that were just the same
- Synonyms of the future, antonyms of a different age
- Trying to make it big, another grain in the sand
- Society run, by Democrips and Rebloodicans
- But what does it matter, I got the world on a platter
- Making a name for myself, writing my very own chapter
- Future ahead of me, I've got the tricks up my sleeve
- Now open your eyes , cause it's time to believe
- So I take you on a spaceship, headed to the moon
- I am the galaxy, earth is what I consume
- Metaphorical rhymes, that turn water to vapor
- Lyrically gifted, just a pencil and some paper
- Working on my art, and i'm taking it slow
- But I'm still just a kid, with an immaculate flow
- You might say I'm crazy, and your probably right
- The present is dim, but my future is bright
- Developing rhymes, from the power within
- Now onto our journey, it's time to begin
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I'm stuck at the top in a broken elevator
- i still remember the days on the rap escalator
- I'm not a battle evader
- I'm ready to run circle im the human equator
- If i loose I'm coming back like a table waiter
- I'm never a hater
- And my rhymes never rusty like tow mater
- I use to rob and break in houses dressed like darth vader
- I'm from Atlanta the eastside Decatur where it's greater
- Wear a gray or black flag you would think im a raider
- I'm AYE1HUNID I'm no fabricator
- Add the NOSLEEP i get money while you count sheep
- I practice what i preach the truth is always in reach
- And my teeth white gold like they fell in bleach
- Take a gram of molly now I'm geeked like screech
- I fucked the plug daughter and she sucked me like a leech
- One time for the trappers free meech