Battles  Fratricide vs RubenOta

RULES

Rap about losing someone in ur life you loved

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Battle on August 3 2015 and Battle on September 5 2015

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • im sitting looking at a photo of my mom wishing she was here
  • so i could whisper something in her ear so she could hear
  • that i love her and miss her every fuckin day
  • my life hasn't been the same since you passed away
  • you were the one that always had my back when i skipped school
  • our love was hard to remove but know my life is getting kinda screwed
  • cuz now i can't do lots of stuff without getting upset and start to think about you
  • my life i wish i could still see you and give you kisses wish i could just make my life renew
  • you were the one that made my life better and helped when my sister died
  • always had my back when i couldn't hide always wiped my tears when i cried
  • when i was stuck and couldn't do nothin to get loose you always found a loophole
  • we used to always watch the Superbowl and always took our dog for a stroll
  • just wanted to say i miss and still love you with all my heart watching all the memories we had
  • im trying to just get out my emotions and i hope ur life and wat you did will make and impact

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Little Jake
  • Little Jake
  • Little jake
  • Little Jake
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  • I passed a little kid he sitting on his own
  • I asked him where he lived he said he don't got a home
  • Ever since his dad died he's been all alone
  • And he can't call his mum cause he can't afford a phone
  • I said what's your name and he said my name is Jake.
  • And he's been living on the road for years. For god sake.
  • he doesn't even know how the hell this HAPPENed
  • The only thing keeping him alive is apparently my rapping
  • My music inspires him to keep on going
  • He wants to be a star yeah he wants to be glowing
  • He's been on the streets living in the cold
  • But no matter what happened he stayed strong and bold
  • Yo Jake I really respect ya
  • How could they walk by and just reject ya
  • You will be a star one day I bet ya
  • And very soon your mum will collect you
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  • Little Jake
  • Little Jake
  • Little Jake
  • Little Jake
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  • It's been 10 years and jakes mum DIDINT come
  • Now he's sitting here messed up drinking down on some rum
  • But his dream of becoming a rapper still hasn't faded
  • Wants and opportunity so he has waited
  • Another 5 years Jake becomes a rapper
  • Turned his life over another chapter
  • Got a wife and two kids, now every time that he spits
  • He spits the truth about his life, now he's got a proud wife
  • But he will never forget all those times on the streets
  • Now he's lucky enough to afford bed sheets
  • He's selling out arenas, making lots of money
  • Has a great life but he stills misses his mommy
  • Next day gets a call and the women said
  • Jake I'm so sorry but your mum is dead
  • Jake is crying lying on his bed
  • Then he takes a gun and puts it to his head
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  • That night then Jake died
  • He had a good life
  • He had some good times
  • He had some good rhymes

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