Battles Fratricide vs RubenOta
RULES
Rap about losing someone in ur life you loved
Max of 63 lines
THIS BATTLE IS OVER
Fratricide won this battle!
3 ROUNDS
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Battle on August 3 2015 and Battle on September 5 2015
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- im sitting looking at a photo of my mom wishing she was here
- so i could whisper something in her ear so she could hear
- that i love her and miss her every fuckin day
- my life hasn't been the same since you passed away
- you were the one that always had my back when i skipped school
- our love was hard to remove but know my life is getting kinda screwed
- cuz now i can't do lots of stuff without getting upset and start to think about you
- my life i wish i could still see you and give you kisses wish i could just make my life renew
- you were the one that made my life better and helped when my sister died
- always had my back when i couldn't hide always wiped my tears when i cried
- when i was stuck and couldn't do nothin to get loose you always found a loophole
- we used to always watch the Superbowl and always took our dog for a stroll
- just wanted to say i miss and still love you with all my heart watching all the memories we had
- im trying to just get out my emotions and i hope ur life and wat you did will make and impact
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Little Jake
- Little Jake
- Little jake
- Little Jake
- I passed a little kid he sitting on his own
- I asked him where he lived he said he don't got a home
- Ever since his dad died he's been all alone
- And he can't call his mum cause he can't afford a phone
- I said what's your name and he said my name is Jake.
- And he's been living on the road for years. For god sake.
- he doesn't even know how the hell this HAPPENed
- The only thing keeping him alive is apparently my rapping
- My music inspires him to keep on going
- He wants to be a star yeah he wants to be glowing
- He's been on the streets living in the cold
- But no matter what happened he stayed strong and bold
- Yo Jake I really respect ya
- How could they walk by and just reject ya
- You will be a star one day I bet ya
- And very soon your mum will collect you
- Little Jake
- Little Jake
- Little Jake
- Little Jake
- It's been 10 years and jakes mum DIDINT come
- Now he's sitting here messed up drinking down on some rum
- But his dream of becoming a rapper still hasn't faded
- Wants and opportunity so he has waited
- Another 5 years Jake becomes a rapper
- Turned his life over another chapter
- Got a wife and two kids, now every time that he spits
- He spits the truth about his life, now he's got a proud wife
- But he will never forget all those times on the streets
- Now he's lucky enough to afford bed sheets
- He's selling out arenas, making lots of money
- Has a great life but he stills misses his mommy
- Next day gets a call and the women said
- Jake I'm so sorry but your mum is dead
- Jake is crying lying on his bed
- Then he takes a gun and puts it to his head
- That night then Jake died
- He had a good life
- He had some good times
- He had some good rhymes