CHALLENGER'S RAP

• you've got one battle and your only song is called rejection,
• I'm battling you purely to turn you in the right direction,
• I decided to give you feedback in a battle so fuck the comment section,
• I do this for rappers when i'm bored to help fix imperfection.
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• Cause in your battle with Enock you rhymed it with itself 3 times,
• but that's ok everyone makes mistakes when they first start with rhymes,
• I think you've got talent so I ain't getting bitter with you that's limes,
• you've got to give your all if you want to survive like Rick Grimes.
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• You also tried to rhyme statement and department bro that doesn't work,
• they both have 'ment' on the end.. it doesn't mean they rhyme and when I read that I had to smirk,
• it looked like this... 'i've got a slut living in my basement, she has aids and needs treatment',
• maybe that would work in some places.. not on this site where everyone reads raps on the frequent.
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• I think your gonna go places on this site that's why I did this,
• you only joined the site today and your already a hit not a miss,
• I had to use single syllable rhymes for this and this is the first time I haven't done a diss,
• hope the feedback helped and it's not something you'll dismiss.