Vaga_bond vs WreckitRalphLauren

Battles Vaga_bond vs WreckitRalphLauren

Poetry Battle: Put Down Some Real/Meaningful/Lyrical Rap

Max of 23 lines

Vaga_bond won this battle!

CHALLENGER'S RAP

When I fall asleep, I dont wanna be like the other sheep,
In a dream full of make believe, And blue skies as far as the eye can see,
I wanna believe that we can live in a world full of peace and dreams,
But with guns popping and bodies dropping maybe it's just nun more than make believe,
Is life just a lucid dream, can we visualize more than human eyes can see,
When I Die will you think about me,
Lie awake at night cant fall asleep or am I lucid dreaming, shit,
Life is still all new to me, only God can make your life short,
easily stop you as you breath, our minds go so deep,
But I'm stuck, still have the mind from my city,
in this world there is so many possibilities,
why cant we all hold hands, Hum in Symphony, The epitome of lyrical epiphanies,
Witness space as I write these ryhmes with calligraphy,
I know I have many people cheering for me, What can you see in me,
Fire in my soul, no one turn the gear of life fo me, Did You Feel It?

Challenger

DEFENDER'S RAP

When a girl sees a guy she looks at his shoes,
"wow his J's are spiffy and his swag is something serious"
But since his shoes are clean and spotless it just means he in inexperienced
you can walk a mile in my shoes and wont make an imprint
Not because my feet are abnormally huge or indifferent
But because life has had such a burden on me
Im always used to dragging my feet
And no matter how fast i pace
Someone will always be in front of me at the end of the day
But those hardships are present and have always been
My sole will wear out and my shoes will turn to smithereens and blows alway in the wind
Till then ill keep walking
and when I'm done ill throw em on top of an electric line even though they're dirty
Hopefully a young desperate soul will take responsibility
and continue a boy named wreck's journey

Defender