Battles BIGBEAV vs -BMak
RULES
Everybody on here talking gangster shit in battles so let's switch it up..spit about addiction/pain/struggle/life etc... No dissing just rea
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- ima tell a story about lauren
- use to be a good girl until she started whoring
- but it aint her fault daddy kicked the door in
- beat her in the head until blood started pouring
- so when he slept and while he was snoring
- she sliced his neck for all the torment
- but listen to the rest before you cast or judge
- mama died at birth thats why daddy had a grudge
- when his wife died so did his love
- he started drowning his sorrows away in vodka
- at least two times a week lauren was seeing a doctor
- for another bruised that popped up
- when asked about it at school she said it was papa
- teacher played her like a fool said oh she just wants to be popular
- making up lies to get attention from the older boys jocking her
- but lauren hated school cus the other kids teased and be mocking her
- nobody would listen to her story they thought it was bollocks
- but pops was an alcoholic abusive parent whatever you wanna call it
- he traded her innosense away for profit now she a hot topic
- about how she pops locks and drops it
- she just want to feel loved but convinced its in between her pockets
- one day without a glove lauren told him to stop it he blew up like a rocket
- and knocked her jaw out of socket
- nine months later lauren gave birth to a baby named michelle
- and she swore on jesus nails that she wouldnt do through hell
- or feel the pain that she felt as it sits there and dwells
- she couldnt forget she wouldnt say oh well
- lauren wants a life for her daughter that she never ever had
- cus her childhood was bad and she blames it on dad
- so one day at the pad she shows baby to grandpa
- he laughs and jokes not knowing he wont see tomorrow
- he went to bed after saying goodnight
- she went to the kitchen and grabbed a knife
- gripping it so hard that her knuckles turned white
- what you did to me you wont do it to my daughter
- deep down she was like why even bother
- but she couldnt resist the urge to slaughter
- the evil spirit that was in laurens father
- jumped into her and dug down farther
- now bow your head and pray for laurens daughter
- as THE CYCLE of abuse repeats its self for a little while longer
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Intro
- ...man whatever
- Dre, just let it run
- Ayo turn the beat up a little bit
- Ayo, this song is for anyone...fuck it
- Just shut up and listen, ayo
- My soul feeling hunted.
- My dreamz of a better life with thingz I have wanted.
- Feel so unaccomplished, why must succumb this numbness inside like I'm just being punished.
- No wordz can describe my complexed conscience .
- Its daunting on me feeling doubts do I want thiz.
- Digging down in tha dephz of ma very core.
- I'm just tryna be patient to see through the tunnel.
- Not a goal in ma grasp so I can move on to.
- And girl I just want you to see what becomes ..
- Addicted like heroine your super woman and I must joker or Luther or somethin.
- It's so hard for me to just get thiz shit jumpin..
- No layupz for me going in slam dunkin
- Thats a promise to whoever matterz to me.
- I'll be free
- Letz just see if I fly or I flunk thiz.. Not giving a fuck to whoever don't like it..
- It appears that ma pears don't.
- See bitch I'm psychic..
- And sin iz enticing enough.
- To just fire a gun to their headz then flee oh so quiet.
- But LORD said no violence so I will just riot..
- Like fat people when health scares make them diet..
- I live life so private because I know vultures around me feed on my carcass in silence..