Battles  BIGBEAV vs -BMak

RULES

Everybody on here talking gangster shit in battles so let's switch it up..spit about addiction/pain/struggle/life etc... No dissing just rea

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • ima tell a story about lauren
  • use to be a good girl until she started whoring
  • but it aint her fault daddy kicked the door in
  • beat her in the head until blood started pouring
  • so when he slept and while he was snoring
  • she sliced his neck for all the torment
  • but listen to the rest before you cast or judge
  • mama died at birth thats why daddy had a grudge
  • when his wife died so did his love
  • he started drowning his sorrows away in vodka
  • at least two times a week lauren was seeing a doctor
  • for another bruised that popped up
  • when asked about it at school she said it was papa
  • teacher played her like a fool said oh she just wants to be popular
  • making up lies to get attention from the older boys jocking her
  • but lauren hated school cus the other kids teased and be mocking her
  • nobody would listen to her story they thought it was bollocks
  • but pops was an alcoholic abusive parent whatever you wanna call it
  • he traded her innosense away for profit now she a hot topic
  • about how she pops locks and drops it
  • she just want to feel loved but convinced its in between her pockets
  • one day without a glove lauren told him to stop it he blew up like a rocket
  • and knocked her jaw out of socket
  • nine months later lauren gave birth to a baby named michelle
  • and she swore on jesus nails that she wouldnt do through hell
  • or feel the pain that she felt as it sits there and dwells
  • she couldnt forget she wouldnt say oh well
  • lauren wants a life for her daughter that she never ever had
  • cus her childhood was bad and she blames it on dad
  • so one day at the pad she shows baby to grandpa
  • he laughs and jokes not knowing he wont see tomorrow
  • he went to bed after saying goodnight
  • she went to the kitchen and grabbed a knife
  • gripping it so hard that her knuckles turned white
  • what you did to me you wont do it to my daughter
  • deep down she was like why even bother
  • but she couldnt resist the urge to slaughter
  • the evil spirit that was in laurens father
  • jumped into her and dug down farther
  • now bow your head and pray for laurens daughter
  • as THE CYCLE of abuse repeats its self for a little while longer

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Intro
  • ...man whatever
  •  
  • Dre, just let it run
  • Ayo turn the beat up a little bit
  • Ayo, this song is for anyone...fuck it
  • Just shut up and listen, ayo
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  • My soul feeling hunted.
  • My dreamz of a better life with thingz I have wanted.
  • Feel so unaccomplished, why must succumb this numbness inside like I'm just being punished.
  • No wordz can describe my complexed conscience .
  • Its daunting on me feeling doubts do I want thiz.
  • Digging down in tha dephz of ma very core.
  • I'm just tryna be patient to see through the tunnel.
  • Not a goal in ma grasp so I can move on to.
  • And girl I just want you to see what becomes ..
  • Addicted like heroine your super woman and I must joker or Luther or somethin.
  • It's so hard for me to just get thiz shit jumpin..
  • No layupz for me going in slam dunkin
  • Thats a promise to whoever matterz to me.
  • I'll be free
  • Letz just see if I fly or I flunk thiz.. Not giving a fuck to whoever don't like it..
  • It appears that ma pears don't.
  • See bitch I'm psychic..
  • And sin iz enticing enough.
  • To just fire a gun to their headz then flee oh so quiet.
  • But LORD said no violence so I will just riot..
  • Like fat people when health scares make them diet..
  • I live life so private because I know vultures around me feed on my carcass in silence..

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