Battles  NoonTan vs REVLIS

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Please don't criticize me, I'm a rookie

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I'm coming off the suburbs; bring a message to my peers
  • I'm gonna rip this "rapper's" head off. Pierce him like a spear
  • When I'm done he'll be seeing stars, like he binged on all his beer
  • I never come here unprepared. I know you, I'm the seer.
  • I'm not a pro, but I know I can shit on your career.
  • Look at me in my eyes, you'll be facing all your fears.
  • You better be prepared cuz I'm shifting into top gear
  • Some men were born to fill spots, they have nothing in their lives.
  • Then some are kings with wealth and fame and live with seven wives.
  • Ya Chose a bad day to battle, boy. Got into the wrong fight.
  • I'm so far above you, like I'm flying me a kite
  • Murder is a sin, but I'm killing you on the mic
  • You might get offended by this, but speaking is a right.
  • Put this message in your brain, you'll never have success
  • You'll end up with your parents, wanking it to a left breast
  • I'm gonna make this quick so pay attention to the rest.
  • If you think that you can beat me, go ahead, sir, be my guest.
  • You cannot top my talents, I'm too good. I have been blessed.
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  • The End

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Nah homie you couldn't be blessed if you chugged a gallon of Holy water,
  • I'll leave you spillin' green like guacamole, slaughtered,
  • and wheezin'
  • I'll leave you bleedin' on RapPad so bad people would think it's that time of
  • the month,
  • My rhymes are so blunt, that Bob Marley wouldn't dare smoke it,
  • Dawg I ain't jokin'
  • This ain't a playdate
  • Challengin anyone on rappad is a risk
  • but messin' with Revlis is a deathwish respect this,
  • Or I'll look puny as plankton in a Sperm Whale's jaw,
  • This rapper so stale y'all,
  • Never heard of you,
  • Imma drink some Redrum then Murder you,
  • Drink the blood of you like Dracula gettin' a blood transfusion,
  • You shouldn't do music nah you CAN'T do it,
  • However Revlis on the other hand make a another man look bad as
  • a whore with no makeup on each day I wake up and thank(think) of,
  • A line to use but I won't waste em and if you manage to win
  • I'll look to God and thank em,
  • For a worthy foe
  • Good luck
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