Battles  Grandiloquence vs Sexxydave

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • In spite of her keen insight, she was never too bright.
  • She had a bunch of jumbled ideas but couldn't write.
  • She would sing to herself at night, with limited vocabulary.
  • Living in solitary, she wished her thoughts were ordinary.
  • But there was a shortage in her brain
  • that caused her to be insubordinate and vain.
  • It was hard for her to abstain from defying authority.
  • An unfortunate quality to maintain, she was often inhumane
  • In her thoughts, everyone thought she was surely insane.
  • No normal person could be that deranged.
  • They would speak to her with such a disdain, she would complain.
  • "What's wrong with being different? Who cares if I'm illiterate.
  • I can still be brilliant!" And then she became belligerent
  • Everyone was distant to the point it became significant.
  • They would not make eye contact in fear of her deliverance.
  • She was ignorant to their disinterest,
  • and even more so inconsiderate. Living a life of privilege
  • Thanking her lucky stars for her lineage.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Home invading I'm skating on thin ice,
  • Taking everything,
  • Destroying a set of lives just for ice, Money, and drugs
  • Forget it I'm done with being a so called "thug",
  • Meanwhile the family losing pieces,
  • Their mind repeating the disrupting crime,
  • Recovering from the lost pieces
  • Time won't cover the wounds neither will Jesus.
  • Home invading I'm skating on thin ice,
  • Enticed on money and vices alike,
  • I try to forget about that night, Christ!
  • My pity sufficed thinking of them deprived,
  • My feelings diced, another family hurt tonight.
  • Home invading but now paying,
  • Karma inescapable my thin ice breaking,
  • Incapable of the weight I was taking,
  • Suffocating in a cell, now skating, Hell bound no ice remaining to save me,
  • Just waiting for satan to enslave me, Eternal hell has been long awaiting

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