Battles Grandiloquence vs Sexxydave
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- In spite of her keen insight, she was never too bright.
- She had a bunch of jumbled ideas but couldn't write.
- She would sing to herself at night, with limited vocabulary.
- Living in solitary, she wished her thoughts were ordinary.
- But there was a shortage in her brain
- that caused her to be insubordinate and vain.
- It was hard for her to abstain from defying authority.
- An unfortunate quality to maintain, she was often inhumane
- In her thoughts, everyone thought she was surely insane.
- No normal person could be that deranged.
- They would speak to her with such a disdain, she would complain.
- "What's wrong with being different? Who cares if I'm illiterate.
- I can still be brilliant!" And then she became belligerent
- Everyone was distant to the point it became significant.
- They would not make eye contact in fear of her deliverance.
- She was ignorant to their disinterest,
- and even more so inconsiderate. Living a life of privilege
- Thanking her lucky stars for her lineage.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Home invading I'm skating on thin ice,
- Taking everything,
- Destroying a set of lives just for ice, Money, and drugs
- Forget it I'm done with being a so called "thug",
- Meanwhile the family losing pieces,
- Their mind repeating the disrupting crime,
- Recovering from the lost pieces
- Time won't cover the wounds neither will Jesus.
- Home invading I'm skating on thin ice,
- Enticed on money and vices alike,
- I try to forget about that night, Christ!
- My pity sufficed thinking of them deprived,
- My feelings diced, another family hurt tonight.
- Home invading but now paying,
- Karma inescapable my thin ice breaking,
- Incapable of the weight I was taking,
- Suffocating in a cell, now skating, Hell bound no ice remaining to save me,
- Just waiting for satan to enslave me, Eternal hell has been long awaiting