Battles  JBrown vs user5278637

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • In order for me to be having a dream.
  • I got to be able to learn how to sleep.
  • These demons be SNEAKING up on me in 3s.
  • Taking me down to the ground like police.
  • Your nothing but peices of meat to a beast.
  • When a beast like me could of eatin all 3.
  • The Weed,the pills and amphetimines.
  • I never leave home without packing a piece.
  • Like having a dream will not happen for me.
  • These demons be creeping and leaving the scene.
  • Leaving me bleeding,And breathing in breeze.
  • Holding me down for a couple of weeks.
  • With barely something to eat and nothing to drink.
  • I'm Garenteed to be deceased in just under a week.
  • See My flows are sicker then any disease.
  • Furdt They eat at your kneesThen work on your spleen.
  • Eat away at your teeth,And leave holes in your kidneys.
  • I got something fully loaded ,large,heavy and hot
  • It's called the barrel of my twelve gauge loaded with buck shot.
  • Ka-boom,sent the first shot straight at this hotshot.
  • I'm knocking his socks off,and hitting his soft spot.
  • Taking a salt block rubbing salt in his blood clot
  • Sit back and watch this mother fucker bleed.
  • Jbrowns coming at and be bringing a beast.
  • Now it's the cause and effect for fucking with the best
  • And untill my last breath bitch expect nothing less.
  • From a lyrical genius,with this 8inch penis
  • When hoes want my name its goes "me no hobla English"
  • It's time to be serious I'll leave your ass delirious.
  • Rush you to emergency,then hurry you surgery.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Kaan khol k ek gal meri sunn lo
  • M hu BAD BOY tm mujko choose kar lo
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  • Nhi karna???
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  • Acha sunn to lo..
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  • Likhta hu main khud s copy nhi main karta hu
  • rapping ki duniya bs bohemia paaji ko follow main karta hu
  • or haters ko apni jooti p rakhta hu
  • aaaannnnn
  • yyyeeeeehhhh
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  • karta hu apne mann ki kisi ki nhi main sunta hu
  • khabi jhuka nhi, khabi ruka nhi
  • bas mehnat s apni yaha tak phuncha hu
  • milte rahe mouke rab s dua yahi main karta
  • kyu ki kyu ki main mouke p choka nhi chakka maarta hu

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