Battles Brillig vs PureFire
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- man I spin spokes over roads, broken with log-chains and hill folks
- you're a child's ride token,
- cul-de-sac raised, shaken-snow-globe over it
- leave it to beaver kinda scene,
- we in basements, exploding shit
- masked up and throwing bricks,
- smash Update the Status quo- with this, feeling finality's flow in this
- oppositional comparison, unlike in real life when a weak line's lie,
- gets noticed,
- gaping mouth invites split open lips
- eating the crow whole, soap chunks are throat-known,
- serve 'em up with parsely tips
- til your broke hope finds roads home, shoulders shrugged
- camera panned back, violins dubbed over it
- your in the kinda pinch where help don't exist, broken leg/base of cliff,
- grizzly groaning licking lips; in the shade cuz I eclipse,
- your flows a dripping faucet,
- i'm a dam blown, seeking seas quick
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Im feel like im floatin in the midst of clouds
- No matter what you do, you cant bring me to the ground
- It hurts yeah its hard but you gotta accept
- Sometimes your proud facade just has to be left
- Ive almost now lost all the feeling in my fingertips
- Its getting cold up here I dont need another lift
- I need someone to pull me back down to earth
- Down through the clouds and through to its core
- But now I got no one I feel so alone
- Im coming down to earth surviving on my own
- And this hurts it hard too but its all for the best
- Baby come see me and Ill tell you the rest
- So I told you before to let go of you pride
- But for you that would take your entire life
- Grudges are you thing Im sorry to say
- But your lifes a paradox like the kkk
- You believe one thing you say another
- But everyone can see the sweat around your collar
- Why do you think can just hurt everyone
- I try to talk it out but you never seem done
- I thought we were friends at least more maybe
- Tell me you couldnt feel that chemistry
- You sure enjoyed burning holes through my lips
- But when it comes too true love youre a total miss