Battles AtomWrench vs KaleZulu
RULES
At least 10 consecutive lines with the same ending rhyme. The lines still have to make sense. No dissing, just try something new.
Max of 30 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- When I quit the game it's finished. You could say it's aborted.
- I guess too that I'm Horton,
- Cause I Heard a Who? His name wasn't important.
- They say with some things that quality is imported
- But I'm from the US and still the best over borders
- When I started I had nickels, but now I'm rolling quarters
- Full of two rhymes stuck together, like Siamese twin hoarders.
- I sent the track to the morgue, so its entered rigor mortis.
- You're frozen in fear, like the stiffs you can't perform this.
- Killing like this should be illegal, but I've never had a warrant.
- Yeah, my rap is immoral, but the organization stays sordid,
- And the homophone intentional, but I bet you guys ignored it.
- You and your rhymes come from the belly of a hooker--both abhorrent
- Try to steal my style from a keyboard & you need more than a torrent
- I'd be willing to be a sell-out, if Bill Gates could afford it.
- Because this rap feels stellar, coming down to you from orbit,
- Where I wear the stars around my neck and outshine my adornment.
- Your girl digs vocabulary, so I spit and we cavorted.
- I'm the reason she walked out on you, you know she a-door-ed it.
- Well first I watched and learned, but this time I'm the informant--
- Where I'm a child of musicality you guys are fucking orphans.
- At your high tide, you've got no flow, an ant could fjord it.
- 7 bucks says I'm Prime, that's Amazon ordered.
- If clever should be the new measure to keep rap from being formless,
- I'll be rap's Martin Luther, ninety four theses more to reform it.
- Bump with me, make this an onomatopoeia performance,
- I'll be standing at the church door waiting for the praise to swarm in.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- How come I can't do anything right?
- Imperfect criticism deserving waste of a life.
- I spend all my money and my cognition ain't close to alright.
- I ain't eating no time for sleeping and I'm losing my sight.
- My ideas ain't bright.
- Can't tell my left from my right.
- Success as likely as a penguin in flight.
- Overlooked on my music because my skin tones white.
- Can't abide that I hide.
- All my fears in open light.
- Don't be surprised if I die tonight.