Battles  PoetProductions vs KaleZulu

RULES

NOT MY RULES buddy pussed out of a battle here are his rules: "64 Lines of basic rhyme few mities only but plain rhymes" he only had 16 bars

Max of 16 lines

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • you got posted 64 lines but I bet you only got nine
  • With only three of those lines that are alright and none that are fine
  • Here you want a rhyme Ill give you one of mine
  • Sniff on a dick and start sucking a lime you on a mic its a fucking crime
  • That line recycled like everything you spit
  • Ball up your note book bitch you need to quit
  • Call up a slut and take out your anger on that cunt
  • I'm saying you should for once stand up to the cunt
  • that bore from the front but fucks you from the back
  • I wrote this in speed typing and I never took a class
  • Encase you missed that I'm calling you a Junky so take another one in the ass
  • Rap God of wit you wish you were fast but your just another flunky
  • I'm under the weather feeling dumpy but still got enough juice to attack this monkey
  • A wanna be G-Unit mother-fuck you say you kill then try and jump me
  • I will thump you right into the ground where your mother dumped you and pumped me
  • So fuck you Ill cut this off like your mother did your foreskin, with a kick to her front teeth

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Tell momma we eating
  • your bitch ass akin to riff raff
  • this first draft
  • treat it like its first class
  • I keep this shit locked up like Alcatraz
  • unsurpassed by half of you wack rappers who cant get past facts
  • I'm mad that I'm having to battle you for reputation
  • I'm Doctor Dre but you look like a fucking patient
  • better watch your back like you're on probation
  • I don't speak failure can you give me a translation?
  • My ego inflated
  • sliding for home plate and jogging round the bases
  • like i fucking made it
  • can't see me winning better get some lasic
  • why the fuck you make the battle stipulation that I have to rhyme basic
  • I suggest you get a ghost writer or find a replacement.

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