Battles JimBodhi vs DrJekyl
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- In time I’d like to take flight, my writing might alight, why fight the tight sights
- Recite my bites of time, sliced by my mind, unwind as I try to excite your minds eye
- Why lie its contrite, the dikes at night fight to rise higher than the bright lights
- Sky scraping Nike signs, mind wiping light blinds, blind to the life signs
- Unrefined then redefined, assigned like parasites
- Just branded, numbered dollar signs, no collars white the stains are on the inside
- Don’t trust you might find your prime time to strike and shine has gone by
- Don’t ask why, do it fast then analyse the facts your reacting in a fashion
- That in no time will have flattened the very patterns you live by
- To find comfort late at night, like the K.Y. by your night light,
- Imagine if the tit for tatter chatter didn’t matter,
- And all the scattered cunts, fucked off back to where they’re from
- That’s when their dumb Mums supply them more funds
- Don’t they see they’re breeding an age of needing supporting?
- Like “Remember the early noughties, dumb cunts now in their forties!”
- I’m not reporting nor contorting, just breaking down what I’m absorbing.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Mr Jim Brodhi, I don't know thee
- But I can tell you're a a joke you're just like Loki
- I am an athiest in rap so I don't believe in you
- You ain't real in your raps so I'll happily diss you
- Street fighting, my moves fast as lightning, I aim like a sniper
- I am a galatic champion like Thanos, that's why my belt is Kuiper
- I break your back like Bane with batman, but you'll never rise up
- Fall into a pit of depression, let your body lie in blood
- Sinister six combined into one body to swat this spider
- I'm here to eradicate the arachnid, this bug is such a biter
- I fantasize to be like Lecter, I strap you to the chair
- Saw your skull open, eat your brains with a slice of pear
- I'll give you a minute to say prayer, while I raise this sword in the air
- Dropped it, see your flesh tear, I hang the head for the kid's to scare
- I sit comfortably in the living with your skull beside my desk
- I never let the dead rest, I kept your body within my treasure chest