Battles raven666 vs Ambiguous
RULES
Your life
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- 4 am still can't go to sleep,afraid of beep
- when I close my eyes,all I see is deep,
- sinking to bottom,all I seek is autom
- opening eyes,trying to catch the sight
- but bitch you have been siked,
- voices that I hear,nobody can beer
- like they try cheer,but they whisper fear
- using pile of spears,they will get me teared
- if I fell down,I'll look like clown
- they will get me crown,but bitch I'll be drowned
- getting cell phone want to call doctor,
- if you won't help me doc,I'll fuck your daughter
- burry underwater,merry in a corner,ferry of monster
- answer me dog,why am I feeling,that I have been lost in a fog
- am i another frog,dealing with a snog
- am I another science experiment that must go off
- calling my mom, asking some questions,
- what is my quest,who is that guest
- drawing illustrations,illuminations,illimination
- imaginations,world map has been filled with no nations
- answer ma,why I feel like dead?what is the dream that I had?
- why is it so bad?why do I cry on a pad,pad is to soft get me off the bed
- I must pound my head on a ground that stands,watch my life fade in a red
- don't tell me that this shit if fine,cause I feel like ding
- oh wait it's dinner time,sorry i can't come,I don't mean to be rude,
- I am just tired of playing this dude,
- getting my pills,but man it drills,
- this drugs will never overcome, hole can't be filled
- doctor says it's fine,mama said I am nice,repeated in twice
- but look in my eyes,why are you lying,
- let's blame age,start new page,be new sage
- regular bluffing.doc why are you stuffing, with that shit flupping
- all i needed is truth,fuck the proof,you won't believe me,I'll fuck this roof
- leave this poof,
- I watch the kids playing outside in a school
- why can't I be the one,who won't get to be the fool
- I am leaving this house,I quite playing mouse
- ready to bounce,the king has been bound,words has been pronounced
- and I am so proud,making it loud,faking it sound
- looking at the sky, blue and clouds,remind me of crowd
- I push my pain through, this throught, and I killed my thoughts
- action speaks,thinking can hurt your dreams
- depressed,in stress, no more can be impressed
- I made my lack blossom,and I made it awesome,
- no doc,no surgery could solve puzzle,
- I got injeries,the ones made me duzzle
- my curse,so purse, that surpassed
- everything that used to be sweet
- I got an answers,I ain't made of weet
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Yeah,
- it looks like life
- took a whole new turn
- same old circuit
- but a brand new run.
- Some are the old
- but new is the face
- different objectives, but the same old chase
- With every single line
- every word you spit
- making rivals, to rip your spine
- you are one step ahead?
- nah, nine step behind!
- they wanna run, yes they will run
- winning matters
- else it is none.
- For those who fumbled, fell
- scrambled and waited
- life screwed them hard, soon they evaded.
- With every twist and turn
- increases the pressure
- you have a purpose for
- no time for leisure
- Time ticking past,
- harder is the task ahead
- make a move first
- or be prepared for the worst....