Battles  raven666 vs Ambiguous

RULES

Your life

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • 4 am still can't go to sleep,afraid of beep
  • when I close my eyes,all I see is deep,
  • sinking to bottom,all I seek is autom
  • opening eyes,trying to catch the sight
  • but bitch you have been siked,
  • voices that I hear,nobody can beer
  • like they try cheer,but they whisper fear
  • using pile of spears,they will get me teared
  • if I fell down,I'll look like clown
  • they will get me crown,but bitch I'll be drowned
  • getting cell phone want to call doctor,
  • if you won't help me doc,I'll fuck your daughter
  • burry underwater,merry in a corner,ferry of monster
  • answer me dog,why am I feeling,that I have been lost in a fog
  • am i another frog,dealing with a snog
  • am I another science experiment that must go off
  • calling my mom, asking some questions,
  • what is my quest,who is that guest
  • drawing illustrations,illuminations,illimination
  • imaginations,world map has been filled with no nations
  • answer ma,why I feel like dead?what is the dream that I had?
  • why is it so bad?why do I cry on a pad,pad is to soft get me off the bed
  • I must pound my head on a ground that stands,watch my life fade in a red
  • don't tell me that this shit if fine,cause I feel like ding
  • oh wait it's dinner time,sorry i can't come,I don't mean to be rude,
  • I am just tired of playing this dude,
  • getting my pills,but man it drills,
  • this drugs will never overcome, hole can't be filled
  • doctor says it's fine,mama said I am nice,repeated in twice
  • but look in my eyes,why are you lying,
  • let's blame age,start new page,be new sage
  • regular bluffing.doc why are you stuffing, with that shit flupping
  • all i needed is truth,fuck the proof,you won't believe me,I'll fuck this roof
  • leave this poof,
  • I watch the kids playing outside in a school
  • why can't I be the one,who won't get to be the fool
  • I am leaving this house,I quite playing mouse
  • ready to bounce,the king has been bound,words has been pronounced
  • and I am so proud,making it loud,faking it sound
  • looking at the sky, blue and clouds,remind me of crowd
  • I push my pain through, this throught, and I killed my thoughts
  • action speaks,thinking can hurt your dreams
  • depressed,in stress, no more can be impressed
  • I made my lack blossom,and I made it awesome,
  • no doc,no surgery could solve puzzle,
  • I got injeries,the ones made me duzzle
  • my curse,so purse, that surpassed
  • everything that used to be sweet
  • I got an answers,I ain't made of weet

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Yeah,
  • it looks like life
  • took a whole new turn
  • same old circuit
  • but a brand new run.
  • Some are the old
  • but new is the face
  • different objectives, but the same old chase
  •  
  • With every single line
  • every word you spit
  • making rivals, to rip your spine
  • you are one step ahead?
  • nah, nine step behind!
  •  
  • they wanna run, yes they will run
  • winning matters
  • else it is none.
  • For those who fumbled, fell
  • scrambled and waited
  • life screwed them hard, soon they evaded.
  •  
  • With every twist and turn
  • increases the pressure
  • you have a purpose for
  • no time for leisure
  •  
  • Time ticking past,
  • harder is the task ahead
  • make a move first
  • or be prepared for the worst....

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