DEFENDER'S RAP

• You call yourself "psykotik"
• But you seem a little neurotic and you're rhymes aren't melodic
• Your flow is whack and you can't even write well
• So just get off RapPad and learn how to spell.
• And as for the "sage", why'd you choose that word?
• Why the hell would you name yourself after a motherfucking herb?
• If you want to be a popular lyricist with that name
• Then you'll never gain fame, but your perception must be blurred
• You have no idea what you're doing
• You try to be a rapper but it's like you're just screwing
• Around, and that was a little enjambment
• A poetical technique and it wasn't a compliment
• But I doubt you even know what it means
• 'Cause it seems that you only use simple words
• From other raps you've seen
• You're such an Eminem wannabe
• If you spent less time wanking over him
• You could develop yourself lyrically
• But I doubt that's ever gonna happen
• Seeing improvement from you would be like
• Hearing dialogue from Charlie Chaplin
• It's an impossibility
• And I'm gonna wrap this up now 'cause I want a cup of tea
• Yes I realise I just rhymed two t's
• But it doesn't matter 'cause I'm done in
• 1
• 2
• 3