Battles djskatta vs Hutch
RULES
No Holding Back
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- While you showed a spark of imagination, I want to set you straight.
- You are not yet ready for what about to come.
- It is obvious you have not done enough research. Your rap sounds generic.
- Your main problem is that you do not understand what a picture book is.
- The main character needs to have an obstacle to overcome
- which is the event that launches the story.
- Rhyming picture books are a hard sell.
- Your lyrics sounds like hell for your meter is a bit off.
- Ask yourself whether you are serious about rapping or its just a passing phase.
- You fool! Make your dreams come true while you still know everything!
- I see that no amount of years will help you to become a better a rapper.
- Though you show a great deal of life experience and a desire to put it on paper
- I advise you to challenge yourself with a new trade
- like working with bituminous materials, in the glades
- Or using power tools to screw-up people’s houses.
- Although you will grow older and greyer.
- and afterwords grow fatter and balder.
- You will find that nothing really changes but numbers on the calendar.
- After a decade you may stand proud as a dead oak.
- Your magnificent beauty cloaking the dead, rain soaked
- with an interior where the blackness grows.
- Your arrogant thoughts will follow you
- and your quick mind will remain quick… for now.
- Should I encourage you to continue in this useless persistence of hope,
- then I would be depriving the world of another burned out loser with a dope-
- hurry-up-and-do-nothing attitude.
- Whatever you can say could have and should have been said long ago-
- when your ignorance blinded you into having the strength to defend your convictions.
- Therefore I must remind you that chasing dreams of life
- filled with true memories & attention
- where experiences will only be forgotten next season
- is like a pile of leaves in the autumn- crumbling into nothingness.
- These words I must send you like waves to the beach
- crashing and washing away the land and the stone a tired sailor would reach for.
- I am the persistence of the ocean
- and I will continue to test your strength until you crumble and fall or wreck and drown.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Not everything is exactly as it seems,
- I mean, I'm comin' off as clean, but, in reality,
- I, let my morals sink, to, those who don't think,
- I'm as gifted as these, rich white breeds,
- If you can't see motivation behind my eyes,
- You're in need of glasses to reveal those lies,
- How dare you question I, put the limits to the sky,
- I'm just gettin' what's in it for the winnin', bitch, imma fly,
- Now I'm steppin' in my zone,
- Comin' in as gold, and, takin' over thrones,
- Great Britain down to Rome, and, all around the globe,
- I've been killin' what's in it for the winnin' on my own,
- You could smoke weed and maybe open a third eye,
- But to see me perfectly, you're in need of four eyes,
- Go and get some lenses and get rid of the TV,
- Then you'll see that I am not exactly as I seem,
- My God, I got, icon, of a God, that's a given,
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- With the odd and fond flow God put down as a gift and,
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- Doesn't seem so crazy when you visit it in person,
- But, lately TV screens is the 20/20 vision,
- Doesn't seem so hazy when you visit it in person,
- But, lately LED is the 20/20 vision,
- Cookin' some wicked rhymes, hookin' up some vicious primes,
- Doin' this since I woke up this morning all the way to bedtime,
- This is just me, I, really like to try,
- Got my eyes, on the prize, no surprise, I am wise,
- I will not give away no money to some bullshit lies,
- Vision straighter than five guys, emcee 'till I die,
- Guarantee the best of me, never oversee my mind,
- I will always idolize, those with 20/20 eyes,
- Damn, pick myself up off the floo',
- I'm, better than befo', with a new, improved flow,
- Ready to take all control, never let myself go,
- I will idolize, 20/20 eyes, 'till I'm ghost,
- I will make my life this,
- Fuck anybody who says that my chances are not big,
- My response to that will be to tell them, "Suck my dick,"
- Cause if that's what you see, you need to get your glasses fixed,