Battles  Suddenlydope vs Manicpunch

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Wish I could just leave, breath, quick relieve,
  • Parents bitchin about my attendance living life like I'm a peasant
  • Think they can toy me, you ain't a dentist , more less, Denis the Menace
  • Never present at breakfast, you just never attended, couldn't digest It.
  • I'm an adolescent, I'm not heaven sent, here's my confession
  • I'm full of aggression learned no lesson, so I blew you off to discretion
  • Filled with rejection from lack of affection think you're an exception?
  • Clear perception, people at school think I live a good life,
  • Been through enough no need for advice, here's just a slice of what it's like
  • Waking up at night to a hollering drunk throwing provoking feelings
  • Knowing, I can't stop it he's overflowing, hoping his sorrows
  • will flee, maybe to a condo, what do I know ? I know tomorrow's
  • Going to be filled with potholes, look yull see my dark un happy eyes
  • Filled with sorrows so I trip, incidents by which I scream high pitch
  • Still the pain recites at it's own heights, heard from all levels of the house
  • No one comes, no one ever watches out,
  • It's common I fill my body with toxins you claim I darken
  • But I see a spark, light to the end it's how I defend, feeling
  • One hundred percent condensed, now I don't feel possessed
  • I'm still not protected any oppressed stress will leave me
  • A complete mess but still I ride the roller coaster of life
  • But the motor died, I'm a soldier who never dies
  • But I don't feel alive, so I step to thrive it's hard, I feel dead inside
  • But what's on the outside?
  • A nice guy, trying to get by, on the outside filled with life
  • It's like he's in paradise, but you're mind
  • Boggled when you read a poem about me being bottled up
  • With darken heart-end descend,

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • short rap:
  • You can figth me, tear me down, but i will always get back up
  • i never quit to i reached the goal, because am the unbeaten champion
  • the scars in my face is the symbol that i figth to my death,
  • i dont know what fear is, never experienced that kind of bullshit
  • i think is something all my enemies have when they figth me.
  • i am the legacy, the only think above is our god, eminem.
  • The world also need a joker, so he made Lil Wayne
  • but to the case, my enemy never go above, only when there soul goes to heaven.
  • They call me the deathbringer but i liked to be called ManicPunch,
  • People call me Mental crazy but i think it is called passion for what i am doing
  • "he is unbeaten" is the only words i hear in the ring.
  • the enemies know my fist and the groundfloor better anything
  • because the meet se each other every figth.
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  • thats all for now!

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