Battles Gdoughmane vs Blu_J
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Shed my blood, through the fluid, of this ink pen
- share my pain my life of ruin soldier once again
- i know its the plague caused by these mortal men
- but the rise of hate my knowledge cant comprehend
- how much pain do think one man can take
- how much stress do you think one man can shake
- how long will i have to deal wit this fucking hate
- how long will it be before my fucking back breaks
- from carrying these burdens up upon my damn shoulders
- you know i don't deserve em but deal cause im a fucking soldier
- you know the streets the heat been known to fold ya
- to cold this deep i be even the freeze can scold ya
- thought money'd be the answers too all of my problems
- but now i gots more and no clue on how to solve em
- told you before if he gots what i need than i got to carve him
- cause my family gots to eat and i'll be damn if i starve em
- and you know i flow about struggles cause thats all i know
- and you know i flip about jungles cause thats where i grow
- and you know the freaks in the streets trying to kill the dough
- so you know i throw blows knuckle up and fuck them hoes
- i write about stress and greed until i bleed
- but for a ma fucka like me baby thats all i see
- cant be the g off in the cemetery away in the green
- so i heat when my feet beat these streets of envy
- cocaine killing of my peers but still i supplied
- through blood sweat and tears i needed someway to survive
- but at the end of the night i cant even lie
- see a thug cry tears in my eyes praying for a new life
- (hook)
- im in too deep in the game
- im in too deep in the pain
- im in too deep in the rain
- im goin drowned in my tears of sorrow
- im in to deep in my name
- im in too deep in the fame
- im in too deep to maintain
- so i pray for a better tomorrow
- How many times is my mind goin be on suicide
- how many tries am i goin slide before i die
- tell me why this life i fight was chose for mines
- define this fucking light that im supposed to find
- cause this game im living aint nothing but darkness
- this pain that i was giving done made me heartless
- this strap i carry daily made for nightly spakness
- on them foes from the past them dawgs is barkless
- so dont blame me for the way i been acting shady
- and dont hate me for the way i been acting lately
- and dont tempt me cause the way that yall acting lately
- may send me off insane killing anyone in my damn way
- everythings a conspiracy i see you plotting on me
- i see the way they look at me like this lil punks crazy
- im in too deep but see we can blame it on society
- no chance for a white trash kid from the southside of the O.n.e.b.
- demons running through my head late night as i lay in bed
- psychotic voices coming from the dead
- rather cries and screams instead
- visions turn bloody red dreaming of those that bled
- yelling my name tortured in pain beyond the grave bed
- but they my new friends in this game of life that im in
- and until i join them i'll send more to be with them
- bent and cant comprhend the reasons i am who i am
- but when those men ask again just tell em in my defense
- (Hook)
DEFENDER'S RAP
- look, I hope these lyrics aren't disqualified
- I thought I was the winner was already implied
- people know my name nationwide
- this is access denied
- so get all your allies
- I'll get mine
- now I'm pretty sure this will be fine
- all this will not go behind
- so I'll win you see well if your not blind
- thanks but you were just a easy little game
- I don't care how you take it I'm giving you the shame
- you get burnt cuz you messed wit the flame
- I just accepted your battle for me to entertain
- so 'm putting you in restraints
- your brain must be misplaced
- because you suck so much it is unexplained
- so does this make your emotions inflamed
- so now your brain has my lyrics engraved
- thanks so much for putting out a try
- but really I just sped by
- if you lose horrify, please don't cry
- cuz you are gonna be terrified
- so you dissed me probably so apologize
- you suck so much it got televised
- sorry this wasn't prioritized
- so this battle just got amplified
- so now this must be classified
- now your life is mortified
- now just stand there petrified
- cuz that makes this simplified