CarlCee vs Thedonofwar

Battles CarlCee vs Thedonofwar

Rap an emotional rap (some one like that) Rap about your experience with raps and the opinion of people about your raps

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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I just wanna cry, every time i try
the tear don't drop, i don't know why
i can't leave longer
so i raising the middle finger
asking ma self if that situation gonna linger
i don't wanna live no more
i'm tired of life i'm autta it's door
cause ma life turned on me like a damn war///
i'm leaving in an act of a clown making everybody lough in the town,
while i am always sad i'm bad, i'm contrite, ya i'm down
i'm done, no more rapping i'm gone
i know i'm not the best, maybe i'm not a rapper but a guest
a fake personality i dressed
every time i'm rappen i thought i was a beast in fact i was considered a pest
''oh wtf you’re a (g) ya fucken funny mcee all of that was just a jest against me''
ya in rapping i found ma zest
like i built from rhymes the biggest nest
every time i rap i got dissed ,i got pissed know i must rest
so may be i should go to a priest
to get out that beast, getting me blest
all the time i missed in rapping
to be from the champion list
but know i'm tapping, hoping to see people clapping/////
ya i'm ghost, know i'm lost
hopping to get eaten by a gust, i'm not the greatest, i'm just an atom of a dust.
maybe ma style kinda bad fag and whack
a white guy tranna act like a black
like santino but thought someday he could be rayback
carl c is gone , mcees hate him vote against him
making him lose to a level one
ya i'm gone, #maybe #I #will #be #back #maybe #I #will #vanish

Challenger

DEFENDER'S RAP

i hear em talking,whispers in the dark
i might see an early coffin,while whistling in the park
they dont really know me,im so distant from my heart
but still i play my role,keep it low key until the right time
have you ever stared into somebody you knows eyes as they die
that red line goes flat,no more life line its nighty nighty time for a lifetime
ive been there ive done that,seen the flare heard the gun blast an ive come back
what do you know about watching friends lose opportunities
from popping two or 3 pills,then cut their wrist from all these bills
too often you and me,know how this story goes,
too much shit around there heads just like a gloryhole
kids lost in the night trying to figure out whos their father like maury po-vich
so no shit,i notice these novice write a bunch of wankster shit clothe it
with a scarf and hankercheif and aim it with a cool twist,like ayo do this!
not knowing the life their mimicking is fake and if they follow suit they lose it
what you see on th tv screen or your inner desires be careful what you choose kids

Defender