Battles  TheOtherSwift vs PoetProductions

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I hardly can surmise that we ourselves
  • who striveth night and day for gold and silver
  • have pride for Chiraq, such as daily swells
  • that brethren, red and blue, we long to kill for
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  • what hologram doth keep us in these spells
  • that makes us deal in dens of lust, and pilfer
  • mostly those who look just like ourselves
  • and entreats past our walls we pay the bills for
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  • more here than any windy city state
  • of mind we weather troubles from the past
  • we have our own slave-whips, we bear the hate
  • in trades of snow and vengeant pistol clasp
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  • so gorgeously engorged is indigence
  • when freedom's found, it's lost a minute since

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I pray for you, to not be a sinner like I,
  • I pray for you, to live a riches life until the day you die.
  • I pray for all, to live in peace and bliss,
  • I pray for all, to experienced God’s gracious kiss.
  • I pray for you, even with sin full in my heart,
  • I pray for you, to hold true to your faith and it never let evil tear it apart.
  • I pray for you, to not be like me forever all alone,
  • I pray that you always have a place to call home.
  • I pray for you, to prosper and always do well,
  • I pray for you, to be taken heaven and not join me in hell.
  • What you pray for me, my days in the darkness of night,
  • I pray you never have to battle the darkest demons I fight.
  • I pray for you even though I’m ghost if only you knew,
  • I pray for you, I do, “I Pray for You”

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