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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Some times... It's hard to be around him... When he drags me down...
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  • Turn my head into a spiral, I don't know why I'm not normal.
  • A bad man faced with a mad man, I need a place without his face.
  • It gets harder to even breath when you know that he's your death.
  • I thought we could change, me and him, but we fought with no cage.
  • I wanted the quiet life with no vice but it's worst with him being nice.
  • Now he's dead but his spirit is inside and I can't stop for a minute.
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  • "Now hold on to your pants, little brother's gone and faints.
  • Yes, I was alive when he was three, then I died ahead of thee.
  • I wanted to scare him longer, guess he didn't care I was stronger.
  • Now he's going to need me but he'll know what it takes to bleed.
  • Little brother, take this mic and beat another dick."
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  • There's a lotta talking now and I'm all outta bucking shots KA POW!
  • I just can't stand him in this shit, talking about a hand taking the hit.
  • The only faggot I ever known is in that third spot because he's hot.
  • He's only hot on fire every time I swore he's lingering he's own rhyme.
  • Shit, brother... You can take another hit as you make him bleed...
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  • "Oh boy, here I come again back from those top ten.
  • I'll tell you I'm the top five, one with this busy bee fucking hive.
  • I spread my madness like a sickness just without his sadness.
  • He's bring me too far fucking down, I hear his screams I always frown.
  • I'm not gonna die right here on his turf, I spread lie after another like I surf.
  • I surf in a pool of blood with great whites, I think little brother's pale white.
  • Here you go, little brother... I already won another battle."
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  • You may won the battle but not the war because I'm in full throttle.
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  • "Just shut up and fuck this douche now before I stuck you with the douche."
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  • You need me and I need you, so we can send him to Hell, fool.
  • So giving you the short, he's my own brother and I'm his other.
  • The question is how can we get along now and then.
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  • "Good question but he needs the decision."
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  • You're battling two rappers in one, so come at us, haters.

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