Gone - Draft 2

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Kaydee's Notes

I previously posted gone and gone redraft . Based on your feedback and the blueprint , I've improved it . Please leave feedback as I hope to make 1 more redraft before recording .
( Cover art is work in progress based on what I hope to name my 1st EP)

 
When your Mother found the note
She sat there screaming
Your Dad just froze
Void of feeling
You thought no one cared
You were drowning on your own
Yesterday your brother ran away
He can't face his own home
He keeps having nightmares and he barely ever sleeps
He barely even eats
 
Your Mother lives in grey and paints on a smile
For your little sister
She ain't laughed in a while
The teachers at school started into space
Guilt , sadness , confusion
The feelings consume them
 
At your funeral we all wore black
Sangs some hymns , like it'd bring you back
Exchanged hugs with strangers who only know your name
They said it's such a shame but they don't know the half of it
I miss the simple things that I forgot to love
I've never believed in heaven yet I find myself looking above
Looking for a sign that you're still there
 
I miss going to the movies on a Friday night
Now the popcorn tastes like ashes and the movie's black and white
Time moves on but I never will
Grief is a mountain
Time's just a hill
Days slip out my hands just like you did
So so young , still just a kid
Now you're gone I kinda wish I was too
How to I keep it together , when I wanna follow you ?
 
 

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Kaydee
Member since June 12 2016

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