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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- *(Verse 1)*
- I'm stuck in this world where the streets never sleep,
- Where the promises they sell, they're too good to keep.
- I got a mother at home, prayin' for my soul,
- But these cold concrete corners got me losing control.
- Told myself I’d make it out, never let it hold me down,
- But every time I try to rise, the weight pulls me to the ground.
- It's a battle every day, trying to find a way,
- But the choices feel like chains, and they’re harder to shake away.
- *(Pre-Chorus)*
- They tell me there's a way, but I can't see the light,
- I'm caught in the middle, fighting every night.
- I know there's more to life, I feel it deep inside,
- But every step I take just pulls me further from the sky.
- *(Chorus)*
- I’m looking for a way out, but the streets are all I know,
- I’m drowning in these shadows, and I can’t let go.
- I wish I could be more than the story they wrote,
- But I’m still stuck here, still stuck here, no way out.
- I’m looking for a way up, but I'm chained to the ground,
- Fighting just to breathe, trying not to drown.
- I wish I could be more than the life I’m living now,
- But I’m still stuck here, still stuck here, no way out.
- *(Verse 2)*
- I seen the ones before me, they tried to break free,
- But the system keeps on pushing them right back to the street.
- I lost some good friends, got blood on my hands,
- I never thought I’d end up here, but I’m doing what I can.
- They told me I was nothing, said I'd never be enough,
- But the way they talk, the way they walk, it’s hard to stay tough.
- But in the silence of the night, when I lay my head to rest,
- I wonder if there’s more than this, if there's something left.
- *(Pre-Chorus)*
- They tell me there's a way, but I can’t see the light,
- I'm caught in the middle, fighting every night.
- I know there's more to life, I feel it deep inside,
- But every step I take just pulls me further from the sky.
- *(Chorus)*
- I’m looking for a way out, but the streets are all I know,
- I’m drowning in these shadows, and I can’t let go.
- I wish I could be more than the story they wrote,
- But I’m still stuck here, still stuck here, no way out.
- I’m looking for a way up, but I'm chained to the ground,
- Fighting just to breathe, trying not to drown.
- I wish I could be more than the life I’m living now,
- But I’m still stuck here, still stuck here, no way out.
- *(Bridge)*
- Is there a way to rise, a way to escape?
- Can I break these chains, can I change my fate?
- The fight is real, but I’m starting to see,
- That the only way out... is believing in me.
- *(Chorus)*
- I’m looking for a way out, but the streets are all I know,
- I’m drowning in these shadows, and I can’t let go.
- I wish I could be more than the story they wrote,
- But I’m still stuck here, still stuck here, no way out.
- I’m looking for a way up, but I'm chained to the ground,
- Fighting just to breathe, trying not to drown.
- I wish I could be more than the life I’m living now,
- But I’m still stuck here, still stuck here, no way out.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- hook ayo you standing up to me like u think u a pro but ill bitch slap u make u
- my hoe i win its ten to zero go snort some coke people like u get smoke
- bow down cuz im the one with Crown ima the type just to let u Drown
- this is no joke look around u fuckingu clown this ant no playground
- ur bars are trass u can kiss my ass if u think u wining this use as a
- lawnmower make u eat my grass bur ur whole body turn it in to ash
- Verse 1: tbh laci
- Alright, listen, I'm sick of this double vision
- More complicated than division
- Yeah, you, Josiah, you're built like a flat tire
- With your musty, crusty desires, go burn somewhere in a fire
- Your armadillo ankles, your dusty hair that is tangled
- No, you ain't no Rapunzel
- Go get lost somewhere, maybe in a jungle
- You callin' me ugly? Bruh, you're so fugly
- You don't look too cuddly, and not very snuggly
- You're built like a breadstick, Olive Garden gets tired of it
- I'm done with this bit, hope you're offended by this (Mwah)
- Ayy, I've been waiting for this part
- Hey, baby, you smell like a fart
- All of a suddеn, perfumes? You add to cart!
- Dusty and dastardly, you have no hеart
- Your little disses with ass rhymes, you think you're smart
- You're not getting any love from moi
- You're caught up on stuff that's against the law
- You cut your T-shirts with a saw
- Cutesy crop tops? More like Suzie's flip flops
- You expect lots of love on this "hip-hop"
- But the hate, it don't stop, no, won't stop
- Seriously, I'll call the cops, while we're on top (Ilomilo!)
- Verse 4: WokeJB
- They said no cursing? Frick
- Pull up on 'em, I got a stick
- I don't even fight, I'ma have to find his kin
- Yeah my girl, she a ten
- I beat my cases they said I liked men (Ayo, what?)
- Yeah my choppa eat 'em up for dinner
- Once we get the body, I'ma eat his live—
- (Stop the recording)
- Verse 5: Øddity & portorosso
- Okay, so, I'm not used to rapping clean
- This is gonna be worse than eating snap peas
- I'm allergic to dairy so I cannot eat cheese
- Matter of fact, I also can't eat ice cream
- I'm gonna be perfectly honest, my verse is pretty trash
- But it's better than Milo's (Woah), and that's a fact
- By the end of the day, my money gets stacked
- I just counted it up and it's like half of half of half of a rack
- (Okay, it was kind of true)
- hook ayo you standing up to me like u think u a pro but ill bitch slap u make u
- my hoe i win its ten to zero go snort some coke people like u get smoke
- bow down cuz im the one with Crown ima the type just to let u Drown
- this is no joke look around u fuckingu clown this ant no playground